Reviews for The Changer
Loubekah chapter 20 . 10/31
I really love your story. It has such an amazing plot and very original, the past story is quite good but a few things did not match up with the timeline ( in 300AC there's no guns ) but well, other than that it's already perfect. Keep up the good work!
twilightkrystal chapter 20 . 7/10
I LOVE THIS STORY! MWA MHA ( imaginary air kisses)
SuperFic chapter 16 . 4/19
so no cakes no shops and definitely no guns
SuperFic chapter 15 . 4/19
her story starts about in 300s AC. So the things you mentioned are not correct with the timeline. it's better to keep the original timeline and features intact.
Lillywhite1 chapter 20 . 2/24
Thanks for writing this story!
Maeby16 chapter 16 . 11/28/2016
Her back story is kind of confusing. she's over 1500 years old at 2009 but your description of the past doesn't correlate with the time difference.
willowteen chapter 2 . 6/22/2016
she absolutely sucks at hiding in plain sight. Its even wores than the cullens
rebekah.vining.58 chapter 20 . 5/27/2016
I think this is like my 3rd time reading your story and still adore it a beautiful story
Guest chapter 16 . 5/14/2016
Some of the back story didn't add up- she's like 1500 years old and still bothers with school, her mum was dressed in modern day clothes and baking a cake but that wouldn't have been the case back then.. And the fact she bothers with Charlie especially how she could be putting him in danger. Apart from that and the spelling I liked the premise of the story and it had me hooked :)
Sword-Vamp chapter 15 . 4/1/2016
love the Story so far, but you really messed up the chapter "painful thoughts" regarding the historical environment. bella being in the kitchen with her mother to bake some cake? As described in your Story, that could be 19th century europe TOPS and still only by cutting you lots of slack. maybe you should just change bellas age to 60 ore something. like this it would make far more sense for carlisle to have never heard about her as well, cobsidering that he spend quite some time with the volturi and aro doesn't seem to keep her existence a secret at all chapter 20 . 7/8/2015
Loved this story.
Guest chapter 14 . 6/29/2015
awww they are so cute together!
Katherine chapter 15 . 11/8/2014
The thing with the bullet is not clever in the story. As she was born about 300 ad and guns were in Europe about 1300 ad.
Katherine chapter 14 . 11/8/2014
That old and not knowing about yellow eyed vamps?
Emily232 chapter 20 . 10/10/2014
I diddnt wanna review till I've finished
And now I have so...

This story was unbelievable I loved every minute of reading it you have a lot of talent and it clearly showed through the story fact I actualy forgot I was reading fanfiction some of the time because it seemed truly professional...

Keep writing ...and I'll keep reading

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