Reviews for The Changer
Lillywhite1 chapter 20 . 2/24
Thanks for writing this story!
Maeby16 chapter 16 . 11/28/2016
Her back story is kind of confusing. she's over 1500 years old at 2009 but your description of the past doesn't correlate with the time difference.
willowteen chapter 2 . 6/22/2016
she absolutely sucks at hiding in plain sight. Its even wores than the cullens
rebekah.vining.58 chapter 20 . 5/27/2016
I think this is like my 3rd time reading your story and still adore it a beautiful story
Guest chapter 16 . 5/14/2016
Some of the back story didn't add up- she's like 1500 years old and still bothers with school, her mum was dressed in modern day clothes and baking a cake but that wouldn't have been the case back then.. And the fact she bothers with Charlie especially how she could be putting him in danger. Apart from that and the spelling I liked the premise of the story and it had me hooked :)
Sword-Vamp chapter 15 . 4/1/2016
love the Story so far, but you really messed up the chapter "painful thoughts" regarding the historical environment. bella being in the kitchen with her mother to bake some cake? As described in your Story, that could be 19th century europe TOPS and still only by cutting you lots of slack. maybe you should just change bellas age to 60 ore something. like this it would make far more sense for carlisle to have never heard about her as well, cobsidering that he spend quite some time with the volturi and aro doesn't seem to keep her existence a secret at all
such.a.heart chapter 20 . 7/8/2015
Loved this story.
Guest chapter 14 . 6/29/2015
awww they are so cute together!
Katherine chapter 15 . 11/8/2014
The thing with the bullet is not clever in the story. As she was born about 300 ad and guns were in Europe about 1300 ad.
Katherine chapter 14 . 11/8/2014
That old and not knowing about yellow eyed vamps?
Emily232 chapter 20 . 10/10/2014
I diddnt wanna review till I've finished
And now I have so...

This story was unbelievable I loved every minute of reading it you have a lot of talent and it clearly showed through the story fact I actualy forgot I was reading fanfiction some of the time because it seemed truly professional...

Keep writing ...and I'll keep reading

RDoster2012 chapter 20 . 7/7/2014
I really enjoyed reading this story! It was very interesting... I just feel like it is unfinished. In my opinion there should have been another chapter, for after the fight. It just feels too unfinished.

If you are still around, I would like to discuss something with you, please send me a PM :)
GreenSparrowSue chapter 15 . 5/30/2014
I like your story even though you are sometimes getting dangerously close to a Mary Sue with you Bella... However: pleeeeeaaase get your historical facts straight! Your Bella was born sometime around 500 B.C., correct? The most advanced weapons technology at the time would have been a recurve bow. no gunpowder or guns. And because of the collapse of the Roman Empire cultural and technological standarts varied greatly throughout the known world. It would be best, if you decide on a land of origin for Bella and do some research, to get a feel for the atmosphere, culture and level of technology of her time. If all else fails, wikipedia can be a good starting point...
AshlynVarela chapter 17 . 12/25/2013
Oh no! Why didn't she use her Healing power on charle?
lisastovall73 chapter 20 . 7/22/2013
I really enjoyed this story, but the grammatical errors nearly made me quit reading it. I aren't isn't a phrase. It's I'm not. Please consider using a beta from now on.
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