Reviews for Sayonara, Ru—chan
madhatter16 chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Its really good but.. Some of those funny lines during the dark scenes really turns me off.. BTW awsome fic
CapriciousUke chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Whoa, Persona is freakin' creepy!
knightinred chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
How sweet. Natsume came to caress Ruka when he was sleeping XD

This is definitely not a garbage. I like how you kept all the characters IC and of course, the plot. Keep up your good work! :)
HaPpY bAcKwArDs chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
im... just... its...

Natsume... Bastard... screw Mikan...

Pedo's... no good bastards...

Sorry... poor Ruka...
Sakura Breeze chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
wow
bobbyneko chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
rape then fluff? sure, whatever in fanfic land, but i CANNOT forgive Natsume handing Ruka over for the sake of Mikan or whoever. That's just...horrible, ultimate betrayal. and then Ruka goes back to him? not in a million years. i guess what im saying is, natsume needs to actually do something to make it up or shows he cares. he was NOT the one who suffered most (the betrayal of having been handed over by your bf for something like rape is the most painful in my opinion). I mean, how does Ruka think he could ever trust natsume again? i dont think he's THAT much of a pushover at all. he was totally used! he's still a person, not a dependent on natsume.

i'm trying not to come on as a flame, but just that natsume would do that, and that ruka-pyon would just accept it is totally unbelievable to me. seriously, like if it was a rape, then well expressed emo-ness and distrust on ruka's part, uber regret and self-hate on natsume's part, a new realization on how important his friend is, revenge on persona, slow mending of friendship (natusme doing something actually worth it to show he can be trusted) then fluff, THEN i could suspend disbelief and be a good reveiwer.

but hey, it's not me, i didnt write the story, and you yourself acknowledge it as a failure. Which it doesnt have to be. If you improved upon it then the fact that natsume was the one who handed over ruka could actually turn into a twistful start to a moving story.

but then, i prolly shouldnt be reading this kind of thing and saying how one can make it better anyways. gomen ne!
Permanent Violet chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
'of how many times had Jinno wanted to strike you with his lightning so he’d see this naked glory'

I burst out laughing here xDD

PedoBear Completely approves of Ruka-Rape!
Kosette chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
Wow, you hardly find any of these fics... but hey, it wasn't so bad,i mean, it was really cute and fluffy and all... hmm i wonder if natsume actually does that... oh anyway, don't EVER say that your stories are rubbish. it was great but sadly i could never write like that TT ha has...
Fortune Ferdinand chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
... I'm going to think on this one and get back to you. What I'd like to see is a nice multi-chaptered fic starting with the abuse and betrayal and maybe, hopefully progressing to a place where forgiveness and love can be found. Does that sound all gay? Lol. Just trying to lighten the mood! Don't get all down on the fic. You have the bare bones of what could be a really deep, interesting story. And standing alone, it's a really dark and creepy look into Rei's twisted psyche. 'Persona isn’t a patient monster.' I LOVED that line. Brilliant!
Sian Blue chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
OMG! I've read this story like a million times, and i've just noticed that your the same person that wrote, "Seme?"! This one is my favorite! Keep writing!
ichigo-kitten chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
no offence but why does this story sound slightly gay. for wat persona did to ruka and the ending when ruka ased is it is true if natsume sneaks in his room at night just to caress in different places. ANd then Natsume pauses ah well. Is it a gay story. Or is ruka straight and he got raped but persona while natsume cant help but seduce ruka every night by sneaking in his room. Im confused?
Irish.Toffee chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
...wakaka, nice story there... hope to see more fics from you! -

...xoxo,

blueGem
ladyccino chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
eek.

beautiful.

o.O

you choose appropriate words.

:]]
lucanogilove chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
This does NOT suck, it's awesome. Your a talented writer, and this fic just goes to show; Everyone Loves Ruka. Period. Hehe, can't wait to read more from you~