Reviews for Mrs Kendall Morgan Kane
batie-state-of-mind chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
I like this though I recommend two things. Making a new paragraph when a different person speaks. Something like:

"You'll do fine." Jason said and Kendall laughed.

"Jason you're the best thing I've had in a long time. I don't want to screw us up" Kendall said.

Jason responded, "You understand my business and you don't get yourself in situations, even if you did I still love you."

"I love you too, it's just that I'm not usually the girl you take home to mom, I'm the girl that mom puts a restraining order on." Kendall said quietly and then they kiss.

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Also I'd recommend making each part a bit longer. But its a cute story!