|Reviews for You're Only Mine, My Love|
| unknown chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
I just read it and i hope you didnt forget to update because the date is from 4 years now
| NotProcrastinating chapter 2 . 9/25/2011
Aww i really liked this fic! Buuut- Wers the 3rd part? *keeps clicking on next button* WORK BUTTON WORK! Plz update sum more while i press the next button~! :DD
| Vincent Noir chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Holy C.O.W.! This Fic is EPIC! The narration, the dialogues, the scene, and the characters are excellent!
| Vincent Noir chapter 2 . 10/26/2009
Fluff and sweet. I hope you could write mayhem with komui in it...
| kate4394 chapter 2 . 10/16/2009
you write good allenXlenalee fanfics. please update this one soon!
| 5Y2-ZAKfoetaripttub chapter 2 . 9/19/2009
The first two chapers are great! I can't wait to read the next one!
| LadyMagix chapter 2 . 7/31/2009
Omg! OmG! OMG!
YOU'RE really good!
words are really powerful
I could really... *nosebleed*
I really suggest that you continue
| Beyond The Dream chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
I guess that this first chapter was good, as fanfictions go, but please, please, please get someone to proofread things before you submit them. I admit that I am a bit of a grammar nazi, but really, a comma or two wouldn't hurt! Also, try to stay in past tense if you want the fic to be written that way.
For example if you write something like:
It felt like I am in love.
It should be written like:
It felt like I was in love.
It feels like I am in love.
Again, I apoligise for being a grammar nazi, but bad grammar hurts my brain.
Sorry for the harsh review. Don't hate me!
| TransientTruth chapter 2 . 6/7/2009
Why are there only 2 reviews?This story is AWSOME!
Chapter 2 was really great and I 'lol'ed when they said what they did that night would be a secret. XD
Hope you'll finish chapter 3 soon!
| PatamonPrincess chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
ONE REVIEW! That's an outrage! This fic is nice! :D
*cough* Anyway, seeing you are apparently new to writing, how about stopping by the AllenxLenalee forums here on this site? :D We are Number 3 and it is run by my Sis. If you refuse, that is okay. We are just lonely and bored there. Not to mention quiet. :/
| Saber293 chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
good job :)
I love it XD
hope u'll cont. writing!~