|Reviews for All talk and no action|
| Inlovewithjazz chapter 1 . 3/25
I liked this little story, would love to see you make it longer!
| MissTigerLily1013 chapter 1 . 3/11
More please..? :)
| Arabella Whitlock chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
You have to continue this. I feel so sad that they can't be actually together.
| CoboltDragon chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
I loved this!
| christag banner chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
I want more! Please?
| babygirl2928259 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
| ImmortalLoveForever chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
He showed bella some of his :)
| tadpole25 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
''Just showed Bella some of my moves.'
'You've been teaching Bella to fight! Are you insane?' (Like I said, most of Jasper's humour went right over their heads.)
Fantastic, I love the idea that the family just does not get Jaspers humor.
| grempler1 chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Fantastic. Loved it. Loved it. Only thing would've made this better was more.
| grempler1 chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
I enjoyed this story tremendously. Hope you continue it.
| Alybethed chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Hot damn! Do I get to read more of this? (hehe I sounded like Em) It's fantastic!
| GeezerWench chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Love a sneaky, snarky Jasper!
Edward should have smelled him all over her!
Edward's an ass.
| PoyaBaby chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
I think you should continue this fanfic, I want more chapters for this! :) I loved it and I can't wait to see if you will continue :)
| TwistedNeiviv chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
Haha. Stupid Eddie. Good story. Rawr! :)
| JXB Addicted chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
LOL! That was great ! The end was LOL! Bella and Edward aren't really married if they haven't consimated the marriage! How could Alice not seen that? TTFN! JXB ;0)