Reviews for Fate's hand
mumimeanjudy chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
A lovely chapter. Now we are left to know what Hermione and Ron know regarding Sirius that would hurt Harry to discover.
drang88 chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
Do you know? This is an absolutely wonderfully well-written story...the caring between Voldemort and Harry is wonderful to read, especially when you consider the fact that Harry, or Rhyian, doesn't approve of everything that Voldemort does...and a great, plausible reason for Harry to move to Forks!

I can't wait for the next chapter...I really do hope that Rockwell gets silenced somehow so that Rhyian can go undercover longer...but I suppose that Rockwell can't escape, especially since Voldemort is keeping such a close eye on him!
Lola chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
Very interesting! Very different from and Twilght/Harry potter crossover I have read and trust me I have read a lot! Very interesting concept and loved the development between father and son! Thew concept of Tom being an over bearing parent amuses me! lol... Update soon!
Firehedgehog chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
very cool, continue
EternalStar1004 chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
I am really enjoying the orginial idea/story. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Slythenclaw88 chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
Rhyian is going to Forks isn't he? I can't wait for the next chapter.
EmeraldEyed chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
Yay for updates, please keep up the great work!
Shura Magami chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
And Next, we will see Rhyian at Forks, right? Yeah! Finally.

I hope Rhyian wasn't alone there. I cross my fingers that Draco and Hermione will go with him too. Draco, to atoned for his faults, which is almost kill Rhyian. And Hermione, because that's so her character, she will follow and accompany him to the end of the globe, literally. She can makes excuse like in canon, which is her parents wanted her to return to the muggle world. Ron can guard the fake Harry.

Beside, when will Draco and Hermione become a couple if not now?

Love the story, your plot is so smooth, Rhyian's integration to the muggle world are believable. Please keep up the good work

"Fanfiction is the food for the least for MY soul."
Uzumakiblood chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
hi Uzumaki here!

I just want to say that I love your story! :)

I can't wait for the next update! hope you update soon! :D
Kanikan chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
It's a bit weird that I'm actually enjoying this, couldn't even tell you why, all I know is that I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.
Jesseka89 chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
this story is bloody awesome!

in most dark harry stories, he is evil, hates ron and hermione and is most likely sleeping with voldy.

this is a very interesting twist on a twilight HP crossover. i really liked how you solved the horcrux dilemma, and this is a really interesting way to write a "harry is tom riddles son" story!

i cant wait for the twilight part!

i also cant wait to find out what happened to the real harry potter

keep up the good work!
Lego Land chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
I'm really enjoying this story a great deal. It remains interesting and unique where most HP/TL fics seem to follow the same script over and over again. I look forward to reading more, soon.
Enivrement chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
I'm thoroughly enjoying the story. It's a very novel concept. Looking forward to more.
Noa chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
Am I right to assume Harry/Rhyian will be going to Forks soon? To be honest I almost forgot that this is a HP/Twilight crossover. :D I really like how Harry didn’t get all powerful overnight. The fact that he has to study and work hard for it is very good, it makes his character very realistic.

Thank you very much for sharing another wonderful chapter of your story. Keep up the good work!
Utena-Puchiko-nyu chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
I love this chapter. Voldemort is so IC. I really love that.

So, Rhyan's going to Forks, uh?

I see that you are undecided for Ron's couple. I like RonNeville. I just said.

Kisses from Argentina!
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