Reviews for Fate's hand
perfectly weird chapter 2 . 4/30/2009
oh i'm excited to see this story unfold! please update soon...i love everyone's calculated acceptance to the secrets and how Harry is not turned into some wishy-washy hero(ine?) with no sensible head on his shoulder...well done!
Spaz666 chapter 2 . 4/30/2009
OH my dear goodness that was awesome! The plot is interesting, the story has great flow, the grammer is correct, and this is a totally different story line than most others. It is also nice to have a story that does not start out in Forks and is going at a slower pace than most of the stories.

Also, that Lamia bit is excellent for pushing Edward and Harry together later! Not to mention the Dad Riddle factor that will make itself known at some point. At an inconvenient moment hopefully!

Oh man... if you keep up with this type of quality I won't ever complain. Pinky swear ;)
Baby Fawn chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
oh wow this is a real good story so far. i have like the first 2 chapter read hope to read more of this sotry soon
alexa-abrille chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
What a cliffy!Cant wait for the next chapter!:)
Hikaru Kosuzaku chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
Wow. This is good. In fact, this is really good. Really, really good. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Sabaku no Sable chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
that made draco sound gay or atleast bi since he is dating a girl now. or maybe i just read too much slash. either or. XD
chez chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
Just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this story and can't wait for the next chapter- please update soon!
Lego Land chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
Well, this is a refreshingly new twist on the typical TW crossover. I'd become quite sick of the usual crappy plot, so I'm hoping you have a new spin on "Harry goes to Forks". I greatly look forward to seeing where you intend to take this.

The only problem I can see Harry having in his escape, is money. He gave up the Potter heritage and one can only assume the vaults went with it.
mogeta5 chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
Wow, I really like this Story.

Is this your first one? There isn't another one on your Account. Really great.

I'm german by the way, and can understand nearly everything. The Plot develops easily and is good to understand, even for me. There's nothing worse when your reading in a foreign language and don't know who is talking, where everyone is or what is going on in general.

I'm looking forward to new chapters, and I've already subscribed the Story to my Alertlist.

I'm really lazy, when it comes to Reviews. but if you're keeping this Story up in that quality, I might be tempted to write another one.

Till then mogeta
Silence of Sorrow chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
Hmm... Very interesting so far, I can't wait to see hoe your going to build this story up. And I love the idea that you're starting your story before Twilight. It'll give us more depth to this story :) Also, I've always loved the Voldemort-father stories. I can't wait. Thanks for the chapter, I hope that you will update soon.
drang88 chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
Thank you for this chapter. I do like the slow pace that it is progressing makes sense for a story to be slow in the beginning while all the pieces are collected and fit together to make sense...just a question, though (you'll probably answer this in the following chapters): is Harry first going to restore Voldemort before fleeing into the muggle world?

Anyway, this is very interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!
CatishAngel07 chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
Brillent, very interesting and intreaging story. Keep up the absolutely awsome work!
fifespice chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
ooh so hes dracos cousin sweet and what ahppened to the real harry potter adn who else knew of teh adoption hmm adn what will happen next and lucius took the news well and rhyian formerly known as harry when will it all sink in with him
of Serendip chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
so Harry looked like a muggle, Riddle senior.

bye bye to hot James Potter image...
AirElemental101 chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
Is it bad of me to wish I'd found this story a bit later after you'd had a few more chapters finished? Because seriously... the cliffies suck. :P lol, thanks for the update and I'll be looking forward to more.
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