Reviews for Fate's hand
njferrell chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
This is a new look at a HP/Twilight crossover. I love that it will be Edward/Harry.

I like that he is related to the Malfoys. I hope when he gets to Forks, they go with him.

I look forward to them takeing down Dumbles.

I so see Narcissa giveing Harry's wardrobe a makeover.

I hope since he isn't related to the Dursleys, Lucius gets him out of there real soon.

I noticed Ron's pairing isn't set. Since Victor Krum is on their side. you could pair him with him. Ron does like quidditch.
semper paratis chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
This is a wonderful start. You have taken the much used cliche of Harry as Voldemort's son and have made it into to something very interesting. I am curious about how Harry's meeting with Lucius will go (uncle, cousin?). I am also extremely curious about how this will take Harry to meet Edward. Great start. I can't wait to read more!
Spicebalm chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
This is really intriguing. I'm definitely looking forward to more.
Marluciel chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
i like this alot. its very unique and creative. i cant wait to read your next chapter!
Kynnetic chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
So far this story seems well thought out and has already given quite a few twists to the tale. I was actually surprised when Harry read the letter left to him under his real name. I have not read very many fictions of Harry Potter that actual involve this character often.

I also love how you've provided the back story and history behind what you have written so far. I'm also excited to see how, exactly, the crossover with Twilight comes in to play with your story... It should definitely make for some interesting reading.

Thanks for the great read,

Marcus1233 chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
A fascinating read. Coupled with the fact that I'm the 13th reviewer made it more appealing.

Hm...from the looks of it, it seemed that you are trying to incorporate a classic touch to the telling however it came almost awkward.

I like reading it so far. I look forward for the next chapter.
alexa-abrille chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
This story is intriguing and very different from the ones I have read so far!I cant wait for the next chapter!:)
VampWitchCat chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
.Gosh! I LOVE your story! It is very intresting and original! I can't wait for the next chapter! Your a great writer.
kimpotter chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
This is So GOOD please update as soon as you can! I Can't Wait!
mumimeanjudy chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
A very nice start and it is quite logical that Hermione would have done all that research for Harry. I'll be looking for the next chapter.
drang88 chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
This is a very promising beginning...I like that you have clearly defined the cultural conflicts in the Wizarding World and how that has made Harry a Dark wizard...too many authors provide no explanation and expect their views to be accepted without questions...

I'm liking it! Hope to read the next chapter soon!
BabyDragom123 chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Great start, love the long chapters.
Ophorium chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Brilliant first chapter! I can't wait until you update so I can read what happens :)
fifespice chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
ooh i like this so voldie is harrys dad so what exactly is harrys relationship to lucius and draco if hes part malfoy too and will lucius help harry what will happen next
Cibbler chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
This certainly is of to a good start. I'm very curious about how you'll introduces Edward and co.
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