|Reviews for Left Holding the Bag|
| twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
awesome job so far. i love it, and it sounds intriguing. cant wait to see what happens next. update soon!
| KrittleTwilighted chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
I love it!
| nermalasu chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
great start! i'm excited for this story!
| mg9 chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Woot! Cool new story.
Nice first chappie- setting the scene.
Yay for good writing :)
| NoWaitThisIsAwesome chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Yay! I loved it! Dark, broken, noir-ish Edward and flapper Alice? You guys amaze me. I can't wait for more. :)
Ya'll rock my pants, and socks, respectively.
| Triger3happy chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
I like it so far! please update soon!
| Sheeijan chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
I'm feeling really bad for Edward right now. Talk about losing everybody. And you killed off Garrett, aw man! I actually liked him in BD. Great start though, very noir. Bella would be considered a knockout during this time period, I would think with her facial structure and all.
Thanks for writing!
| siromygod chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Omg, *sob* Garrett. *Cries some more*
Alice! I love how she brings 's a speakeasy?
And holy shit, what a way to begin a fic. DAAMN.
The whole thing with Edward's age is too cool.
| BelleDuJour chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Great job on the writing! You really captured the noir feel and style!
| Trusttheplastic chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
aw yay! and so bella mets edward...
| kimberlycullen10 chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
WOW. this is absolutely amazing! the plot is already so unique and you completely nail the 20's tone in edward's characterization.
alright, so i almost cried when garrett died. that means a lot. and his parents! i mean, i saw that coming, but still. you heart broken edward's; i know this. i just have to give you a hard time about it cuz i wouldnt be me if i didnt. ;)
THANK GOD FOR ALICE CULLEN. she will always save the day, i just know it. and her and edward are perfect together, all firey and smart-mouthed. just perfect.
When she looked at me, I thought perhaps the world had stopped spinning.
...was bloody brilliant. for reals.
GAH! THIS STORY! i will be waiting impatiently for more.
*smiles knowingly at mandy*
i love you both so very much!
| xmariposita chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Wow, this is very intriguing and so different from anything I've read! I can't wait to see what happens next!
| Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Oh, this is good.
| kolfan88 chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
I really love the time era you're setting the plot in..for some reason, when I saw reading the first chapter..I kinda imagined it like LA Confidential..but in the 20's lol
| fattoad chapter 1 . 4/23/2009