|Reviews for The Christmas Welcome Home|
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/28
wow,, four years and no end. I do remember the show where Erin tells of Paul's abuse, and womanizing being the reason they divorced. I have enjoyed your version.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Wow...who knew it could get that ugly?...lol As whitewashed as it may have been, I would have to say I prefer to stick to the original peaceful loving ways of this family.
| wandamarie chapter 7 . 5/3/2012
wow please up date when you can thanks
| wandamarie chapter 6 . 5/3/2012
great work thanks
| wandamarie chapter 5 . 5/3/2012
thanks keep up the great work
| wandamarie chapter 4 . 5/3/2012
it is a good one thanks
| wandamarie chapter 3 . 5/3/2012
| wandamarie chapter 2 . 5/3/2012
oh no all h3ll is going to brake lose Paul is not going to be able to stand after all the men in the family get done with him
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
wow great work thanks
| Acer83 chapter 7 . 4/4/2012
| Galaxy-Defending-Hopeful chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
This is a really cute, nice story. I really like it :D
| clare wiseman chapter 6 . 3/14/2011
were is the rest of the story
| Miss-Independent146 chapter 6 . 7/29/2010
i reallly loved it!
please update soon - have to find out what happens next (:
| andiej chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
I REALLY miss this story. I think its awesome. Please update soon.
| KeDe chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
I'm pleased that someone is doing Waltons fanfics. This was such a wonderful show with lots of great characters that have so many stories left to tell.
Your story does not depict a normal Walton's Christmas. I see the love the family members have for each other but where's the happiness?
There are some technical issues I have with your story: it reads more like a play where the characters come onstage when their name is mentioned; you change from past tense to present tense; the dialogue sounds stilted. People talk in contractions: I'm, not I am; they're, not they are, etc.
Also, I understand there is great difficulty when dealing with so many characters, but I feel there was just too much standing around, especially after he hit Erin.
All that being said, I did Henry enjoy it so I hope you will see your way to finishing it.