|Reviews for Eternal Night|
| janefanatic chapter 10 . 4/12/2010
Wow. What a bitch! But then again, I can't exactly blame her, and I can't exactly feel sorry for Edward, either... your story's making me so conflicted! ;-0
| Mirta.S chapter 10 . 4/12/2010
This is the most delicious angst I've ever read and I've read a lot ;). The battle between self-loathing/disgust and attraction in the next chapters should be very interesting.
P.S. It takes a lot of luck to find something qualitatively written here. Thank you for your story.
| HopeStreet chapter 10 . 4/12/2010
I'm thinking she both liked the feeling of control and was disgusted by it. However, I think she'll do it again. I actually like the way that Bella has pawned him.
| mommygirl chapter 10 . 4/12/2010
Wow that chapter was powerful. I really love your writing. These characters are so complex. I like this Edward, but he definately needed his ass kicked.
| Donut Magnet chapter 10 . 4/11/2010
Oh wow! Bella is so badass, I love it! I love that she turned it entirely back on him, and made him relieve her experience in her memory and then reality.
I really hope poor Alice's vision of her 'brother' was not of him in the end result, she'd be scarred for life (hmm, eternity seeing as though she's a vamp)!
| luvinJazz chapter 10 . 4/11/2010
Not so cocky now I bet. That was the perfect revenge. Can't wait to see what happens next. Plz update soon.
| x-love-life-x chapter 10 . 4/11/2010
Great chapter - I'm really enjoying this story.
Although, this chapter did have its fair share of mistakes, but that's okay. One thing I did pick up on was you repeated a couple of sentences near the beginning. In the third paragraph, you have,
"it seemed that the walls around my consciousness could be expanded to encompass others, as I had done with Edward in the school parking lot. Inadvertently, I was able to shield him from his siblings' powers for a moment. I remembered the feeling—it was as though the walls of my mind stretched to enclose him in some sort of tunnel with me."
-which is basically the entire content of the sixth paragraph.
Just thought you should know ]
Update soon, because I can't wait to read more!
| HeathersTwilight chapter 10 . 4/11/2010
Wow what else will she have planned for him
| FenixMJR chapter 10 . 4/11/2010
Loved the chapter, Edward deserve some punishment
| Lblinky-Winky chapter 10 . 4/11/2010
That was some chapter...really made you feel for Bella more and understand her anger towards Edward with a lot more detail. Im really loving this story please update soon cant wait to see Bellas POV!
| b4bystar chapter 10 . 4/11/2010
OMG, GO Bella GO! Amazing revenge, really loved it. I wonder how this is going to affect Edward ;p
| HeathersTwilight chapter 9 . 4/7/2010
I so love this
DYING FOR MORE
| Chalger chapter 9 . 4/7/2010
Wow, your edward is utterly amazing, dark and tantanlising, he is a joy to read
| GoofyXxGabby chapter 9 . 4/7/2010
great story but im having trouble understanding whats really going on...how exactly is she suppose to exact revenge on him? and when are the rest of the family coming back? im so confused. lolz but love the story so far.
| steflynno chapter 9 . 4/7/2010
Oh, I'm bouncing with excitement for the next chapter. I love these 2 characters. I love the fact that Edward is dark and twisted but he has a soft side to him. And I love that Bella isn't this meek girl who lets Edward push her around. I hope his punishment will not be all pleasurable for him. Another great chapter and I know I told you before but you're one of my favortie authors. Maybe one day you could do A Darker Shade of Green in EPOV or maybe a couple outtakes. Like when he first noticed her or his reaction when she told him she was a virgin. Just a suggestion. Update quickly.