Reviews for A Deeper Shade of Green
jk chapter 17 . 12/2/2016
does bella have a std yet?
jk chapter 13 . 12/2/2016
ya bella your not a virgin...Edward knows all about deflowering virgins! he deflowered all the girls at his old school...hell hes so fucking used up hes already been with Tanya...over and over again...PUKE...and bella is so fucking stupid she fucked that nasty dick without a condom !
HAHHAHAHA I hope she gets a untreatable std
jk chapter 12 . 12/2/2016
wait WHAT? He was already a used up hoe in fucking 9th grade?/
so hes been a nasty whore for over 3 fucking YEARS?
oh my god,,,,,bella cant touch that dirty dick! its GROSS!
jk chapter 11 . 12/2/2016
this Edward is just a slutty little human boy...why does he talk so big? "Ill never let anyone hurt you bella"

LOL whats a stupid 17 year old boy gonna do...its not like hes a fucking vampire
jk chapter 10 . 12/2/2016
why would bella FALL APART? she barely even knows the nasty used up manwhore
jk chapter 9 . 12/2/2016
half the girls at his school? so that's like what...100 girls? more?
how many virgins? 20/? we need numbers!
jk chapter 7 . 12/2/2016
Edwards only 17 and hes already a used up whore...whys he so fucking gross?
and why didn't bella have anything to say about it? she didn't even THINK about asking how many chicks hes fucked! if he has or had stds! shes just like awwwww hes tortured I can fix him...
bellas fucking dumb and Edwards gross
jk chapter 1 . 12/2/2016
what with bella being a fake fucking whore?
that whole...look but don't touch bitches...puke
Twihard13586 chapter 21 . 10/20/2015
Awesome story! I simply loved it.
Ninkita chapter 21 . 7/24/2015
Oh lord, why had I not read this before? There's such a lot of high school fiction, but this is definitely one of the funniest, best written ones. And may I rave about the characterisation for a moment? Seriously fun Bella, and I don't think I've enjoyed a jasper cameo so much, pretty much ever. I'm going to reread this soon, and review every ch, because how does this not have more reviews?
solidae26 chapter 3 . 12/21/2014
Wow. This Bella is a conceited bitch. I'm out.
Thanks for writing!
Syndi-Dowell chapter 21 . 6/11/2014
Great story. :)
Guest chapter 21 . 2/9/2014
I love this Bella!
JavaMasta chapter 13 . 8/17/2013
Loving this story so far1
Sattinson chapter 20 . 8/15/2013
Nice.
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