Reviews for A Chance at Life
FanfictionLover chapter 5 . 9/12
I loved the plot immensely. I have searched for stories like these but I never found it. I am glad that I found your fanfic. Ty for the wonderful read.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/24
Ug. This is where I quit reading. I HATE Mary Sues/Mart Stues. Why would you ruin a good story with one? There's nothing more disappointing than to spend hours reading a story only to find that the author crapped it up with an original character.
Jissy2013 chapter 5 . 8/15
Love it
domsijohn chapter 5 . 1/29
So love this i just think kylie sev harry would be better together
domsijohn chapter 4 . 1/29
Kylie sev harry would be good
domsijohn chapter 1 . 1/29
Marrying his mom lol
Rebecca chapter 5 . 1/27
This is really good! Please update soon!
Argos chapter 5 . 10/1/2016
I really hope you haven't abandoned this! You have put so much effort in to it dearheart! I read this without even a break and I loved the way you're telling this story. I was concerned at first when I saw so much details that you put in to the story: that you would find yourself tangled like a kitten in a yarn ball, but you're doing an amazing job of laying it out.

I hope you will continue this when you can find time.

Best of luck,

PiffyEQ chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
So sad that this hasn't been updated in a long time and has seemed to have been dropped :(
flour-chan xXx SSS chapter 5 . 6/1/2016
This is so good! I love it! I seriously hope, that you carry on with this story. It truly is gripping, and moving. You feel as if, you are apart of the story.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/21/2016
Fascinating story! Love your writing.
duchessme chapter 5 . 2/19/2016
it was too sad to know such an amazng plot abandoned
love the story
Tommy14 chapter 4 . 1/3/2016
I'm rereading this story again and am so enjoying watching Harry deal with his new life and Severus being so protective and possessive of Harry. Severus' POV are so funny in regards to Harry's obliviousness.
Ilaria-Jade-Phoenix-Slytherin chapter 1 . 11/18/2015
Read this ages ago n loved it!
Fenris Jin chapter 5 . 10/19/2015
Severus! Kyle is touching your Harry! Throw a tantrum please! You're allowed, the centaurs won't mind since you're still a foal until 15.. XD

It's kind of funny that it was Severus who invented Wolfsbane.. which is being used to help werewolves he clearly doesn't like. I wonder if in this future, had the Wolfsbane not been retained by Harry, if Severus would willingly create it again.. I still wish for Severus to be the one to create the cure himself though.. I think it's only fitting that he gain the notoriety considering Harry already has claims in his other creations.

I see.. So that's why the original Severus didn't become a vampire. He preceded Harry by some 20 odd years. So it's Harry's fault he became a vampire.. xD It'll be nice if our dear time traveler has realized this. XD I wonder about the mating allure though. Will Severus activate it once he reaches maturity? It would be a bummer if Harry was immune though.. And how come Severus has to wait until 30 before he stops ageing? ..But then again, I think he'd appreciate that. I doubt he'd be thrilled to be stuck with a teenage body.. Like Harry.. XD

This has been quite a fun read. I really enjoyed it while it lasted. :)
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