|Reviews for New Moon EPOV|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Really good. Keep writing. This should be edited. For real. Best EPOV I've read so far.
| RobinBrooks chapter 14 . 9/19/2013
I liked the part of when Edward takes out the top to the lemonade that Bella bought when they sat together for lunch for the first time. That was really a great remembrance. However, I always thought the top was metallic not plastic...but the book doesn't say...it's just how you picture it in your head. :)
| RobinBrooks chapter 31 . 9/19/2013
I hope you decide to finish NEW MOON. I'm so very sorry for the bad things that have happened...and very glad for the great things. Congratulations on you new books. But I DO hope you finish NEW MOON. I doubt I'd have started It if I knew it wasn't finished. :(
| RobinBrooks chapter 27 . 9/19/2013
I'll try to check out your new story soon. I want to finish this one...then reread Midnight Sun. :)
| RobinBrooks chapter 26 . 9/19/2013
I'm sure your new book will be a success. Do you still check this site out. Are you aware you have a new fan (me)?
| RobinBrooks chapter 24 . 9/19/2013
| RobinBrooks chapter 23 . 9/19/2013
Just to help you out if you want it. NEW MOON, Chapter 20
8 paragraphs from the top:
Memories swan in my head, over and over.
Memories swam in my head, over and over.
I'm still loving the story. :)
| RobinBrooks chapter 22 . 9/19/2013
THis chapter was VERY good. I think that you captured Edwards' perspective very well. :)
PS - Write back some time.
| RobinBrooks chapter 21 . 9/19/2013
One day... I'd love it if we could discuss Rosalie. :)
| RobinBrooks chapter 7 . 9/18/2013
I love your writing style. I wish I could write as you do. I love your metaphors and similes. You've got it down perfect. Keep writing. :)
| RobinBrooks chapter 6 . 9/18/2013
I love this. I don't think your masochistic or anything like that. You just know how to write heart-wrenching stories. And I think you're capturing Edward perfectly. Now he IS a masochist!
I found one mistake in Chapter 5: the paragraph goes like this:
I'm not going to take you back there, Edward. If you wish to get out of the car the run the rest of the way I won't object but with everything that has happened I won't so easily bring you back there when you are in this kind of a state," he explained.
It should read:
If you wish to get out of the car and run the rest of the way
You're doing a WONDERFUL job!
| RobinBrooks chapter 5 . 9/18/2013
NEW MOON - Chapter 4
I read your author's note. You're doing a WONDERFUL job. I love your stories. I really don't know if Meyer could do much better...it's like you've made the story your own thru Edward's perspective. Meyer claimed that she was planning to write a portion of NEW MOON from Edward's perspective...but ONLY a portion, not the entire thing.
I've noticed a few grammatical mistakes every now and again. But your stories are SO danged good I hardly notice them. You are super-duper-awesome! Can't wait to continue the story. :)
| RobinBrooks chapter 4 . 9/18/2013
CHAPTER 3 - NEW MOON
Are you KIDDING me? This is fantastic...you are a brilliant writer. I couldn't tell that you had ANY trouble at all. Wonderful Job! :)
| yohnney chapter 6 . 8/12/2013
I know its stupid but I actually cried in the last two chapters :')
| alternativetwins chapter 31 . 7/30/2013
i love this story and i really hope you update it soon :)