Reviews for VCR
Viktorija chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Well done!;)
Johanah Tally chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
This is pretty good, but Peter doesn't talk like he's British.
summerlover1 chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
awesome oneshot this is how they should have ended the ep
wjobsessed chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Well, well. I guess I'm not the only one who noticed Peter's self-imposed mental distancing from Olivia in "Bad Dreams."

There is a very interesting tone to this. Liv's mad and your Peter seems desparate to clear himself.

"Listen Liv, I'm sorry I doubted you. I...I should have known that you were not delusional." I wonder if they will ever discuss this in the next episode?

"Olivia, for the love of me, I'm not dating your sister!" I wish I could be sure of that.

"Hey, I'm not the perfect guy you think I am." Ha! She's well aware.

"I can be there in ten, just say the word." You can boil down Bolivia to a few basic concepts-this is one of them. All she has to do is say the word.

This was a well-written, moody piece. I think you captured Olivia's tired, tortured state very well. He's lucky she even took the call!
TheFrenchMermaid chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Pour une fois je review en français, il m'aura fallu de temps de réaliser xD Et je n'ai pas l'excuse d'être un cobaye donc...bah je vais être très constructive, comme toujours : j'adore :)