Reviews for Tapas at Twilight
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
I love this story so far! I can't wait to read more! Please update again soon!
Mandi82 chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
LOL! So true... Love it :)
christinemarie13 chapter 3 . 5/7/2009
Once again you've put out a great chapter. I'm really excited to see how Edward will be incorporated into the story. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
bug2001 chapter 3 . 5/7/2009
Great chapter! I love how Bella ended up getting her business loan, LOL. Very interested how Edward's gonna play a part in all of this. :) Until next time!
persephonesfolly chapter 3 . 5/7/2009
Good chapter!

I thought it very realistic that Bella would freak and and worry after the euphoria of dumping soup on James wore off and the reality of her situation sank in.

Making Angela the loan officer was cute - as was having her pine over Ben!

About the recipe, if you don't add gelatin and whipping cream, does it stay like regular lemon curd, the type you'd use on scones?

I'm thinking of making a lemon layer cake with merange frosting for Mothers Day and I thought it might be a good idea to put lemon curd between the layers instead of frosting, but I don't want it to solidify the way panna cotta does.
perpetually chapter 3 . 5/7/2009
Yipee, loved it!
kelseycjim chapter 3 . 5/6/2009
So good, when do we meet Edward.
cshorte chapter 3 . 5/6/2009
Great chapter!
Jexena chapter 3 . 5/6/2009
I really feel bad for Bella now. I am sure that at the second it all seamed like a good idea. I definitely would have done it. But she has others to think of. Especially since she wasn’t the only on to walk out this time. She had taken her friends down with her. But I am sure that it will all work out in the end. Things happen for a reason and Karma knows who deserves what and when they need that extra hit of good fortune. I am sure that Renesmee will enjoy a trip to the mall to make up for Bella not being there to help her tonight. She is a preteen after all. Unless she is like her mom, then she can help to drive Alice crazy. That should make for an interesting day at the mall. You have a really good Renee here. I like the support she is giving Bella and how she is trying to give her ideas of how she can finally achieve her lifelong goal. Alice has the right idea. Think it all out now. Worry about all the practical parts later. I like that Angela is the loan officer. That ensures that she will have a fare chance and I am sure that Angela will do everything she can to help Bella once she sees how badly she wants this and how organized and informed she already is about it all. See what I was saying about Karma. She may not be able to do anything about the application now. But once she makes and tries that recipe she will be wanting more. Then she will be sure to give that loan. I knew that was going to happen. I am so happy for them. I cannot wait to see what they do to start the ball rolling now.
Jexena chapter 2 . 5/6/2009
Good job Bella. Don’t let him think he has anything over you. She isn’t actually better, she just slept to the top. I always like the playful banter that people put between Bella and Jasper. You just know from there characters that they would be kindred spirits. It would be really hard for them not to get along under normal circumstances. Okay, at least Tyler didn’t let him push him around. But I have the feeling that he should have left Bella pout of his final sendoff. I feel so bad for Bella and Renesmee. James needs to do some actual work and let Bella go home to take care of her baby girl. I would have waited for him to be entering the kitchen then I would have punched him right in the face. I would then tell him I quit and that I hope he actually knows what is in the salmon dish. I still like my idea. But what they did was fun too.
Jexena chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
I really like that James are in this and still kind of the bad guys. That is an interesting twist you don’t see come across like this often. Am I seriously the only person that hates the name Nessie? I really thought that the poor kid could get a better nickname than that. Not that I liked her actual name any more. The reason for it was awesome. But she should have just been called Carlie. That is really sad that Bella feels like that. But it is a fact for many. You miss the idea of someone being there more than missing the person themselves. It doesn’t make her a bad person. But it is good that she realizes the truth of her feelings. I think it is slightly weird to think of Renee meditating like that. Then again, it is right up her alley of something new to try. This sounds like a more permanent basis though. That is the weird part. That was a very informational first chapter into the life of Bella.
love bite chapter 3 . 5/6/2009
I love lemon desserts. I will have to try this one. I am enjoying the story. So well written and I like the characterizations.
Ezzery chapter 3 . 5/6/2009
I have a lemon obsession right now, so thanks a lot for the recipe! I am glad she got the loan. LOl Great chapter!
tomato blush chapter 3 . 5/6/2009
yay! that was exciting...bella got the lo-an. loved the part with angela and the recipe...can't wait for next time :) great job
Hazelnut4o6 chapter 3 . 5/6/2009
Great Chapter! It reminds me of Beauty Shop (with Queen Latifia)

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