Reviews for Tapas at Twilight
Mastaspammip chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
yay we finally meet edward! hes gonna help with the restaurant and Yay! lol can't wait for more!
voi ch'intrate chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Edward's wearing a Cubs hat. [dies] Great new chapter! This story is so cute and funny!
love2jingle chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
i hope to try those recipes someday...good story...haha...laughed so hard at the answering machine message
Soccer11 chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
was it edward on the piano? cant wait for the nxt ch
immortalwizardpirateelf-fan chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
HAHAHA Love where this is heading. And "handyman Edward"? Talk about heart palpitations and fainting.
Jexena chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
That was so awesome. I am glad that Bella picked that place. Alice needs to let Bella make decisions for herself and then support her friends decisions. I am glad that everything worked out in the respect of Renee and Phil also. At least this way they don't have to feel bad about moving out. It is totally Bella's luck to have the celing come down on her head just before Edward is supposed to show up. It was funny though. I would think that Alice had something to do with it just to get her in the stupid Juicy outfit. But she doesn't have powers like that here. So ... I was just wondering ... was that Edward pounding away on the piano upstairs? Is that why he knew how to get to her?
neniainas chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Oh my God, that enterance... Just really, that was so cheesy and well written that it wasn't cheesy at all. :D Brilliant. I can just see that situation in my mind, Bella sporting her 'juicy' bottom (so in character of her) and Eddie walking in looking like he came from one of those 'romance novels', you know the kind. And that line at the end, "Have . Mer-cy." indeed. This story is so funny... I honestly almost peed my pants.

Anyways, I just realized that I have been an alwful reviewer, haven't I? I mean, I have read your stories since 'A New Frontier' but haven't written one 'real' review. I feel so bad... But, the good news is that this story is making me want to review. :) It really shows how your writing has improved and to be completely honest, I like it way better than your other stories. No offence to the other stories, but this one just has... a quality that has me jumping off my chair every time I see a update.

I like how the story is progressing, especially the hmm, 'tempo'. Can you say that about a story? It's realistic, not too fast for me to think, "Nobody would be able to open a restaurant with close to no money in a week" but not too slow for me to get bored. There's a nice feeling of build-up with the restaurant, we start off with little money and a shabby place and (hopefully) end up with a fabulous, succesfull restaurant. The same build-up thing occured me with Edward in this story. It did take you four chapters in stead of the all too common four words to bring him out. One thing stayed with me, it was Edward playing the piano, wasn't it? Then what about Mr. Simms? Is he Edward's alias? Heh, I think my speculations are not impressing anyone here... Well, it COULD be true, though I doubt it.

Didn't comment the chapter nearly as much as the whole story... Oh well, hope you got something out of it. :)
kuntrygal chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
OMG! Great chapter! Loved it when Edward walked in at the end!
harasnicole chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Oh God. -groans- I've always had a thing for handymen. And toolbelts. Toolbelts are just ... ohmygod. I won't even elaborate on that. :)

Loved the chapter. I was saying, "Ew ew ew ew ew," right along with Bella when the drywall from the ceiling gave way and she got covered in all that ... stuff. My face was scrunched in disgust, too. Haha.

Can't wait for more. This is getting good.
cindysark chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Come on, you can't throw us Edward like that and then just end the chapter! Cruel, cruel author :-). Can't wait for the next chapter!
Rachxox7 chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Okay, if Edward is the House doctor then who is the person playing the piano. I just can't wait till next chapter!
MusikMuse chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
love this story and i like the recipes you add at the end :)
lauren loves spunky chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
oh this is getting good please update soon! ohh soo good and i think no matter what edward is he is still going to look HOT! haha 3
Hope4more chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
Another great update. I knew Bella would get it as soon as she slid one of her famous recipes Angela's way. BTW, I was laughing at the 'hunkin burnin Edward' comment. Is he going to shake his hips/tush a little too? Can't wait to see where you take us next. Thanks again!
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
I love this story so far! I can't wait to read more! Please update again soon!
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