Reviews for Master
Zexion12 chapter 52 . 11/4/2012
another great chapter cant wait for the next one
Zexion12 chapter 51 . 10/26/2012
i love it i cant wait for the next chapter
Zexion12 chapter 29 . 10/17/2012
love the whole story and quite suprised from all the recent updates i cant wait for the next chapter i highly looking foward to it
HybridPlaything chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Ya see i had to come back to the beginning cuz ya blew up my email. I was at work and my phone just blew up, i was so "omg, shut up... i wanna go home and read more faster clock" :( so yeah i was annoyed at first but now I'm glad lol
kickcows chapter 35 . 2/5/2011
Oh man. No way about Axel and Xigbar! That was nicely played. XD

I love Saix. I really do. I mean, him tying up Luxord to get him to listen? BRILLIANT. I can't wait to hear about what Larxene said in the phone call.

Great update. :D Can't wait to see what's coming next!
xxXXSmileXXxx chapter 35 . 2/5/2011
Tee hee, Larxene's sure in for a shock and I hate to imagine what Luxord will do once he gets free but with Zexion around I'm sure Saix will survive, gotta love Axel and Xigbar though good work
kickcows chapter 34 . 2/2/2011
Yep. That shower sequence was amazing. :D

I really love how you write everyone. The scene between Marluxia and Zexion was really sweet and tender. :) And then the conversation between the others? Fantastic.

Great work on this. Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! :3
kickcows chapter 33 . 1/26/2011
Great update! Yay for damian making you update! :D

I think my favorite scenes were Axel and Saix talking about the baby and where she's from and then everyone in the kitchen. I loved how Xaldin kept scolding for bad language. That was really freakin' adorbale. :D

I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next! Poor Zexion - he just wants his lover avenged. That's really sweet. :)

Nice work! :D
xxXXSmileXXxx chapter 32 . 1/22/2011
Tee hee, good to hear things are looking up for Saix, although I must agree he is turning out to be a bit like Zexion and Luxord, Xaldin's really put his foot in it htough hasn't he, and I'm curious, with all this match making who do Axel and Xigbar have? (If anyone of course). But good job, rather amusing in place, with unexpected twists and turns everywhere which means your doing well does it not? I would think so but anyway, enough of my babble, Looking foward to seeing if there's an update
Hell's Angel 606 chapter 32 . 12/31/2010
I love it so far! Please continue!
kickcows chapter 32 . 12/17/2010
Wow! What a fabulous update! :D

I really loved the exchanged between Vexen and Xaldin. Poor Vexen. T_T I hope Xaldin cracks soon.

Loved the lemon parts. _ Love how Saix has Luxord wrapped around his finger.

And I loved how Axel knows about babies. That's fabulous.

Great work! Can't wait to see what the dawn is going to bring for these guys. :D
kickcows chapter 31 . 10/11/2010

Man, Zexion sure is needy. XD And I loved the exchange between Luxord and Saix. You paint the picture so well. :)

Nice work on this chapter. Sucks about the $50 but at least you're back to posting some stuff. And I love your work. Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! :D
UnknownAlien chapter 30 . 10/3/2010
Yay...! I really like this story and am glad you are continuing it, thank you for doing so.
Chasingyesterday chapter 28 . 4/2/2010
Chasingyesterday chapter 27 . 3/14/2010

hehe, hickies
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