Reviews for Born of Darkness
Alex Brautigan chapter 2 . 5/8/2010
Pixo,

I love this story so far! I like the use of character depth and development on story and location. Yin-Sloth Jungle; did you create it yourself to or is that an already made rifts location? I am very intrigued by the Yin-Sloth peoples, The Freelands, and The Southlands. What location do you have in mind in Rifts Earth? There is, however, some spelling mistakes and grammar. Your story is amazing! Hope you make more chapters to this story! To me its a page turner.

Alex Brautigan
Sergio Frazetta chapter 2 . 2/13/2010
Another cool story. No major errors that I could see. Looking forward to reading more.
Mojo Arrogance chapter 2 . 9/23/2009
Well written. I particularly enjoyed the well thought out back story that you included in the first chapter. Gives your setting a lot of flavor. I'm wondering if you had any particular pre-rifts geographic location in mind when you wrote it... or perhaps thats part of the story, eh? In any case I eagerly await more.