Reviews for Fear
Paul-Kun chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
i want more fanfics with those 2 X3
Misty Narumi chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
aw...this was sweet, but sad...

good job! :D
akiza50 chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Good job,I like it.

First of all, you added emotion,which made the story meaningful.

Then you added good details,which help me think of the story more clearer.

Last,I really like the plot,its well done and all those other stuff.

I think you should contiune on it..I mean I love it...hope to see you update!
Coward Hearted chapter 1 . 4/24/2009

And you came up with something epic here, lol.

*laughs* Really, due to my love of DarkShipping, I was half-expecting, when Kiryu died, for Carly to look at her Hummingbird Mark, have it shine for a second, and have her say something like "Darn it, Kiryu!" xD

Putting it through a phone call, though, was great, because it was epic. Literally. The only thing I could say is it could be a little longer with a bit more description, but there ain't much more to add.

Faved. xD
I am Lu chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Yay, someone besidesme likes this pairing. XD

Excellent job; I like how you managed to combine Carley's feelings for Jack and Kiryu. Keep up the good work. )