Reviews for Naruto: Outcast
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
I sincerely wish you get a slow and painful death.
Mcclaine chapter 1 . 8/12/2015
Sorry but no, I cannot fathom how this plotline is so popular among writers when it's so so unrealistic. No government set up where being in the military for its major source of income would ever exile or decommission their ace in the hole weapon which is what naruto is. In a government ruled by ninja where the hokage has the authority and the elders who are also retired shinobi make these decisions hell would have to freeze over before these stories would be good no matter how well written it is.
coolchick87 chapter 13 . 5/22/2014
I am very upset u stop. NaruxHina831 never start the next chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
WTF this Naruto is a btch to Konoha!
CatariRay chapter 13 . 7/1/2013
im gonna cry now...
Guest chapter 11 . 1/26/2013
"Well aren't you the little Romeo?" Kyuubi asked.

"One more word and the chew toy is history." Naruto said to his tenent, not even looking up from his paperwork.

Kyuubi shuffled a bit, putting a large paw on the toy. "My chew toy." He said to himself.

*Shakes head* How the mighty have fallen. XD
Guest chapter 8 . 1/26/2013 fucking troll XD
N0tMyName chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Hinata said she loved naruto :D (everyone knows though) BUT SHE SAID IT OUT LOUD!
bishop chapter 13 . 7/25/2012
nice concept
Ancantsia chapter 13 . 5/29/2012
Kinda sad that you stopped writing this story as I was enjoying it. It was rather different from other exiled stories and If anyone out there is adopting it please inform me as I would love to read what happens :)
OnGuard chapter 14 . 4/24/2012
Well guess what jack ass, she has not even started, better find someone else.
EditorFin chapter 14 . 6/8/2011
Shame that you gave up on the story its really good. Oh well
AzureNemesis chapter 14 . 5/16/2011
Quite different.

Foresthunter chapter 14 . 12/9/2010
this is a good story
YoungBloodSage chapter 3 . 10/2/2010
Can I adopt your story! Its great!
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