|Reviews for They All Fall Down|
| kickassdani chapter 51 . 2/22
This fic...WAS EPIC! Thank you for 51 amazing chapters!
| The Magnetic Witch chapter 51 . 2/17
This is seriously, truly, admittedly one of the greatest FF's I've read on here... By chapter ten, I knew it was gonna be good, by chapter twenty I thought it beautiful, and now here, at the end, both srory and chapter fifty one?
I think this is a prodigal masterpiece! :)
Thanks so much for creating these lovely bound words together, and allowing me the chance to enjoy this tale to the fullest! :D
| Ana chapter 37 . 2/2
I think it might have slipped, but Harry says "Voldemort" at one point. But nothing happens.
If you ever look over the chapter again, you might want to change that, it might cause some confusion :)
| milodinooo chapter 51 . 2/1
This was amazing. Even after 2 years, then I read this but all in all... Amazing. There were some things I expected to happen but didn't but still ;) great job
| Paradox the Manaical chapter 1 . 1/17
Hello! I know that this review is a few years late, but I wanted to tell you that this story is actually what first got me interested in -Man. Ever a lover of good crossovers, I kept skipping past this story because I'd never heard of the DGM series before, but when I noticed the review count had gone past the 500 mark I got curious and read the first couple chapters of TAFD. Then I googled the manga characters so could picture everything properly, and I've been completely hooked ever since! So thank-you for writing such an amazing story and congrats for recruiting another fan to DGM!
| Guest chapter 51 . 12/29/2013
That was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo frigin amazing! I read the whole thing! I have read th HP series and watched the DGM series, and I love the spin you put on them! You are awesome and I am now giving you a cyber hug becuse of your awesomeness! Thanks for a wonderful story! X3
| dcdc123 chapter 14 . 12/22/2013
ya the mission with the rewinding town was indeed in Germany
| dcdc123 chapter 11 . 12/21/2013
you said that there were 3 to 4 noahs there but if there was skin road tyki and jasdero and devit as one person then that would be 4 to 5 noahs there. just saying. i love the story by the way:D
| AllenWalkerLuv10 chapter 51 . 12/1/2013
I know I know I already commented on this story but I read it again and it is still a great story. I really love this story! It's really great, and I like how you made Draco be kinda nice at the end. I have alot of other things that I want to say but that would probaly be a very long comment! OMG! I just remembered my last comment with the deviantART thing I realized it sounded weird to say that in a comment, so I'm sorry about that! Keep writing stories like this and keep up with the great ideas!
Just to tell you my 'OMG' didn't stand for 'Oh my God' it stood for 'Oh my Golem'... See what I did there! Anyway that's all... Bye!
| Ennun chapter 51 . 11/28/2013
Allow me to say that I deeply enjoyed reading this story. It was beautifully said, masterfully combining -man with Harry Potter and I just couldn't wait the moment i got back home to continue reading it! :D
I must also applaud you for how you resolved telling the exorcist's story through events in HP, like how Allen stabbed himself.
And I don't think I will ever be able to forget the image of Harry with muscles out of my mind XD
Loved it. Keep up to good work :)
| AllenWalkerLuv10 chapter 51 . 11/13/2013
One word WOW! This story was amazing I couldn't take my eyes off the screen even for a moment! I LOVED this story and I was wondering if you made any more -man Harry Potter Xovers? ( I also have a deviantART account, I have no idea how to work it LOL! So maybe we can chat on there, my username is AllenWalkerLuv101) Did I mention that I loved this story! ;D
| Sillage chapter 51 . 10/16/2013
That was one seriously amazing story.
The characterization, the plot, the way you melded the DGM and HP worlds together near-seamlessly, the pace of the story, the Ausbildunsgroman-like tendencies of it, it was all just...perfect.
...and now it's over.
But, like a complete stalker, I noticed that, while you haven't updated any of your stories or published any new ones in a long while, your profile page was updated recently...so if you are indeed still active as a fanfiction writer, all I can say is this: yes, a Noah!Harry story would be the best thing ever, and I would write a glowing review for every single chapter of it (because there is no doubt whatsoever that it would be worth it!)
That said, I am now done sucking up, but I just want to say, again, that this was one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've had the pleasure of reading (as is...Indivisible, I believe it's called - your other DGM/HP crossover, I mean).
| dcdc123 chapter 51 . 10/12/2013
wow to be honest this is the best cross over I have ever read. You have a very big imagination. I hope you make another story.
| IcyLady chapter 51 . 9/15/2013
Great story! I found it because I liked the way “Forgotten History” was written (and the idea there was cool), so I went to see what else you’ve written. I’m really glad I did because this is the best -man crossover I’ve ever found (so far?) and probably one of the best -man stories in general (so far?). I’ve read some pretty awesome Harry Potter stories, though this one still fares quire well in comparison ;). I really enjoyed reading this (probably too much, considering all the things I should have done instead).
There were, of course, some things that I didn’t like and some that I would have liked to write differently, but they are very much outweighed by the things I liked.
So first of all, plot. I think it could have been cool if you diverted from the original plot even more, but I have to honestly say that you did a great job. You didn’t just squeeze in additional characters into the plot of the book (as I’ve seen in a couple of stories, horrible), but rather rebuilt the plot around the new characters and interactions, to a certain degree. Some twists of the action (killing Malfoys, Draco joining the forces of “good”) were very much welcomed and nicely executed. You kept some of the things from the original story that I didn’t like too much, but well: it is your story!
Second: blending the worlds. It’s very important (I think) in crossover stories and it’s so easy to make one “world” dominate the other, but you seemed to have balanced them out pretty well. For example Kanda losing to Bellatrix and Narcissa (as much as it pained me to see him lose) and, on the other hand, Harry never quite managing to be on par with Kanda but still progressing in some sort of realistic manner. The facts that the Innocence deflects spells and akuma cannot be killed by spells, Allen seeing Voldemort’s soul in Harry (somewhat); all that worked fine and didn’t make it seem like the wizards were hugely overpowering the exorcists. On the other side, making exorcists to be basically muggles with Innocence was a good move to not make them too powerful over the wizards.
Thirdly, because he’s my favourite character: Kanda. I hated that you made him into a werewolf, honestly. But! He handled it in a very Kanda-way. If you made him despair or something, it would have possibly made me stop reading the story. Besides, it did give the plot the push in the right direction a couple of times (when he changed the first time, when Harry could put all his fast healing on the account of him being a werewolf). Of course, I would have liked to have more of him in the story and sometimes it felt like he was forgotten, but he did fill his role. I am only surprised Harry never witnessed him coming back to life, I was kind of waiting for that all the time. Of course that would have resulted in quite some explaining and maybe you didn’t want to deal with it, since you were basically re-telling the last HP book.
All the other characters were also well “in character”, which is good and pleasant to read. They found themselves in their new reality as I could easily imagine them to.
Finally, the ending. I hated the epilogue of the HP books. You managed to end the story with a sort of “happily ever after” (except not really, since the Earl is still out there), without making it overly sweet and nauseating. Thank you! You also managed to make a somewhat convincing mixture of magical world into the Black Order. “Somewhat”, because doesn’t the Vatican still dislike magic? And I’m not sure that the magical community would be so open, since they seem to be pretty full of themselves in the books.
And you didn’t kill Fred!
| kiki chapter 12 . 8/19/2013
I hope I get to read about a wolfy kanda soon