|Reviews for One Stupid Mistake|
| 17canada94 chapter 2 . 6/23/2009
that story was sad, really good too.
| Mallory Marvel chapter 2 . 5/15/2009
aw, that was sweet and sorta sad. It was nice, well done.
| Obversa chapter 2 . 5/14/2009
Bella's POV is a nice addition to Edward's, and also givesthe reader some understanding of Bella's feelings as well as Edward's. Both seem to think themselves guilty for Edward's mistake, but both genuinely continue to love each other...Bella's POV was nice, short, and sweet.
Maybe you could try doing some from the other Cullens', Charlie's, or wolves' POV's? Perhaps maybe Rosalie, Alice, Jacob, or even Angela and Ben?
| Obversa chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Aww...that was short, but very insightful. You really give a good image into what Edward had to experience when Bella and Alice saved him from himself in Italy.
| soxmuchxmorexx3 chapter 2 . 5/3/2009
that was cute!
i liked it a lot!
you wrote this really well :)
| kristina.cullen chapter 2 . 5/2/2009
Aw! So sweet and adorable! Great writing and capturing Bella's emotions! So, so sweet. :)
| kristina.cullen chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
I hated what I had don't to her.
I hated what I had done to her.
Would any person but a monster hurt the only person in the world that the truly love?
world that they truly love?
Just saying. :)
oh my. Amazing first half of a two shot. I loved it! So sweet and really Edwardesque. :)
| Cautiously Optimistic chapter 2 . 4/26/2009
That was sad, but sweet, and it summed up Bella and Edward's thoughts pretty well. Good job!
| Intoxicated On Vengeance chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
IT SOUNDS LIKE A POEM! X]
"I was anything, but human"
Oh, so he's a hippo aswell, Oh I never saw that side of him, lol
Good two chapies!