|Reviews for Pokemon Special: The Origin of Manaphy|
| Cindy M 19 chapter 22 . 3/5/2015
I love the story it is epic.
| Cindy M 19 chapter 4 . 3/5/2015
Holy sh*t, this story is intense, it has everything to do think Kyogre right? This is a epic story.
| Skyea chapter 22 . 12/29/2013
OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOSH! ALDER! Black and White and Rakutsu and Faitsu are going to be entering the scene Hurray
...Wait. Are they?
I know this burst of excitement was a little unreasonable, but the tiny bud of hope won't stop growing! How you managed to write more than 15 characters with their respective roles and their own quirks has been an amazing "Wow" factor. The plot! The plot! I'm going to gush all day at the plot. The pace was just right, not rushing nor boring. Snippets of the antagonists kept up the suspense, and tiny affections were thrown here and there. (I love Giovanni now.)
My favorite moments are the incident on the bus where Gold was forced to change his shorts (your writing has the deadpan tone in it, I can't stop my snickers), Saturn and Courtney's little interactions ( I might ship them, just a little), Alder's appearance (hell yes, cuz that hints a possible Unova influence), Red and Giovanni shaking hands, and Silver confronting his father at the end. So much precious moments to hold onto.
So do continue to write! Make many more (so I can gush) and let the story see its ending. Such amazing work has so many potential to be halt here. I'll definitely read this all the way to the end!
| misoriri chapter 22 . 4/11/2013
Please update when you can.
| GlaGlaGlaceon chapter 22 . 2/21/2013
Please continue this, its awesome.
| Random Visitor Girl chapter 22 . 9/14/2012
I wish you continued this...
Two Years Ago, I didn't have an email so I couldn't make an account here.
I read this fanfic and decided to make an email when I was old enough and favorite it when I make an account on fanfiction...
Now I have an account, I favorited this story, I alerted this story...
It's still amazing even reading it more than once doesn't make it lose it's greatness...
It's like a good book...
I wish you'd continue it.
| Theshippermaster chapter 22 . 9/1/2012
UPLOAD MORE EPISODES! PLEASE!
| Theshippermaster chapter 4 . 9/1/2012
you are so good are writing! is this going to be like the one with ash? that version or your own version?
| TheOldRival chapter 22 . 7/4/2012
I miss you. Please, I want more about Silver and Giovanni's relationship. You are doing great!
| Guest chapter 22 . 7/2/2012
wooooooo go sapphire
| mauricio chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
podrias decirme si hay una historia igual pero en español?
| villomaru chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Nice first chapter. I'll be looking forward to reading this story.
| The Edge Of Sanity chapter 10 . 11/5/2011
Pregnancy...it had me startled.
| The Edge Of Sanity chapter 5 . 11/5/2011
That's high school geography, right?
| The Edge Of Sanity chapter 4 . 11/5/2011
Ah, yes, more Sapphire and more diving!