|Reviews for A World of One|
| livebyinsanity chapter 37 . 11/20/2013
I rarely read Twilight fanfiction anymore but this fic will always be one that I love going back to. So much optimism and hope! You have written a very moving and well-structured story.
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/1/2013
Really, this whole mess is Alice's fault for insisting on the party in the first place. However, what is done is done. Blame won't fix it.
| csp4 chapter 37 . 3/5/2011
WOW! That was a little hard to read at times. So much to think about. So much pain & then hope. I got to know the characters a little more. The characters got to know each other a little more - with understanding.
Great story & very well written. I now feel like I've gone thru a course in psychology...a very interesting course!
Thanks for sharing
| csp4 chapter 35 . 3/5/2011
"Nobody was at fault, we all mess up, we all make mistakes" How true!
"Forgive and Forget, it's the only way"
Only half true - forgive, yes - forget, never
| csp4 chapter 34 . 3/5/2011
Esme's story was the hardest so far. It feels strange to me that I'm angry at the others for doing this to her. Maybe cause she is always the 'weakest link' of the Cullen's & depends on the others for her self-worth.
Now on to Carlisle's story
| csp4 chapter 31 . 2/27/2011
We all know Edward's faults, but Carlisle's major fault just popped into my mind. The fault comes up over & over in FF stories as 'doing nothing'. "nobody went looking for him. Carlisle told us not to" Don't destroy, don't follow, don't do this, don't do that, & everyone usually listens then it all goes to hell
3 stories told & 3 of them wanted to kill Bella or tried to:(
| csp4 chapter 30 . 2/27/2011
Wonderful chapter! It was amazing to have Rosalie be so completely honest for once:) After reading 'Jasper's Story' I thought 'Rosalie's Story' wasn't going to be so good. After all, she can get a little tedious at times. I was wrong! 2nd time I was full on crying
You are definately your own worst critic
No failure of this or any other chapter!
| csp4 chapter 24 . 2/26/2011
1st tears of the story:( Edward 'New Mooning' usually does that to me...even after 1,000 times:( The 1st part of the story when everyone started leaving made me feel sadness but when Alice said Edward wasn't coming back it sounded so final
I'm worried for Carlisle & Esme.
| csp4 chapter 22 . 2/26/2011
"Man down," I forced through clenched teeth before sleep overtook me.
LOL LOL LOL the only human in the midst of a vampire war & she says this as she passes out. Maybe it's because the whole scene was tense with so much going on at once that this was so funny. Great levity at the height of intense chaos
| csp4 chapter 18 . 2/26/2011
I sure do hope Alice's vision is wrong:(
| csp4 chapter 13 . 2/26/2011
"I lightly grazed it." He retorted to himself.
That's what my elderly dad said every time he hit a car while trying to park:(
| csp4 chapter 12 . 2/26/2011
Bella & the Cullen's are the most wonderful dysfunctional family in fictiondom::))
| csp4 chapter 10 . 2/26/2011
But I was starving. I picked up the cereal box and he groaned.
"How often do you people have to eat?"
Said the red-eyed vampire::)) LOL
| csp4 chapter 9 . 2/26/2011
You seem to go into a panic attack each time you update::)) Guess that's why you named yourself '. .' Calm down & relax! This is a great story & well written! I'm loving every chapter::))
| csp4 chapter 4 . 2/26/2011
This is a painful story!