Reviews for Fortune's Sight
Originaljuan92 chapter 17 . 3/21/2014
This is such a great story and needs to be continued. I will follow this story hoping it will go on. Please finish it it's so good. Not that many good YuXNaoto stories.
Miaka Kiri chapter 17 . 8/14/2013
Ooh! This is awesome! I'm really looking forward to further chapters! One strong push to reach Nanako right away, right?
This is a great story! Naoto is my favorite character and it's a blast to see the game from her perspective! *_* Thank you! Please keep it going to the end of the game! *_*
Guest chapter 17 . 11/29/2012
Love the story!
Azurerin chapter 17 . 3/10/2011
Umm, I apologize for taking quite a while to read and review your story, please don't kill me just yet, and I won't kill you, too... I also got carried away with my daily lives, which turns out getting "hectic-er" day by day...

I'd say, despite of your long hiatus (which I did, too) you're doing very well (I'm not sure if I did too though)... I really envy you, since you're able to write this good in english... I really wish I could one day...

As for the story... I think there's not much difference between this chapter and the game, but I think you've done a great job for your description of the surrounding and Naoto's thoughts.

I look forward to the next chapter!
zombie-unicorn chapter 17 . 2/1/2011
Asome story C:

NAOTOXSOUJI rules hahahah

i really like the plot and how naoto reacts she is so cute i luv everything ...well, i would like to say more but my brain is ...he is not focus right now, and my english sucks TT_TT but anyways i hope that you'll continue soon

ciao
Anonymus chapter 17 . 1/10/2011
Please keep up the good work1
Rose chapter 16 . 12/10/2009
So yeah poor Souji he well get a bit Angst later on right ware Naoto has to pall him out of it right?.
GrinningDog chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
I read it from the first to the sixteenth chapter and I have to say I pretty much liked how it was built. For although there were some brief times where Naoto seemed to lose "that" what made her Naoto, it was overall very enjoyable and I look forward to read more of your work.

Cheers
KyoshiroXAkechi chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
i like this! please update soon!
Azurerin chapter 16 . 9/22/2009
Okay, here I come...

Well, actually I didn't really know what to say to you, since your work have been always neat, with good grammar and nice description, despite of your age... At least you're not like a certain someone who's quite old but had never produced anything worth of being called "good"...

I like your description of Naoto, I believe with your story, more will be able to understand the situation from Naoto's perspective...

Okay, I guess that's all, I'm quite in a hurry... Good luck for your next chapters!
heylalaa chapter 16 . 9/17/2009
i'm so sorry for my beary-beary (?) late review.

finally you've updated your story~! i've been waiting for a long time for this. xD well, nothing much i could say here - nanako kidnapped, souji depressed. oh, maybe you could add some souji/naoto scene in the next chapter~! -kicked- haha, nah, just kidding. it's up to you. :P

waiting for the next update!

with love,

raidou's wife -?-
metalsnakezero chapter 16 . 9/17/2009
Really liking Naoto's point of view, keep them coming.
leaflett chapter 16 . 9/13/2009
This chapter reads so much like the actual game, with Nanako finally being kidnapped and thrown, and Souji being distant due to his inability to save her on time. It leaves me not much space to comment about, but I do think that things are now starting to get heated with the peak of what is the game's plot beginning.

I am waiting for the next chapter!
Joezette chapter 16 . 9/11/2009
Hihazuki-san,saya pake bahasa indo aja yah...males pke inggris...hehe..kereen banget xD~ banyakin SouNao yah -digiles- saya suka semua ceritanya dari chap 1-16 xD apalagi culture festival n hot spring nya xD keep writing
LunarWolf86 chapter 16 . 9/11/2009
awesome, this whole story so far is awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next
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