Reviews for Episode 2 Love Thy Neighbor Part 1
fannie42 chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK COME ON MAKE THE MOVIE $$$$$$$$
King Davis chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
This great, and keep up the good work. Yet one piece of advice: Let the story unfolded naturally. Don't tell us everything in between each break in the dilogue. Leave the reader guessing about somethings. It will cause them to want to read more.
kezlah219 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Yes! More!
Ms Mimi chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
I loved how you put in the story that Dre owned the bar... Nice way of putting a black man on the pedestal by owning his own bid'ness lol "business"
4CullensandaBlack chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
OMG I loved Junito, I totally wante him to pop up for Ricky in the movie.
Cordero chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
It was good. I liked it, though i wanted to read more it was rlly good keep up the good work
AMILE chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
OMG.. LOVING IT, IT THIS NEW, I'LL JUST HAVE TO CHECK BACK AND SEE
newfan chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Much better approach and flow