|Reviews for Elysium Lost|
| JesskaEspy chapter 7 . 2/1/2013
This.. this is deep. o.o
| Guest chapter 42 . 6/28/2012
BRILLIANT STORY, YOU SHOULD PUBLISH IT!
| Mrs. Pepper Stark chapter 8 . 8/17/2011
Good chp! ;) ever heard of Romeo and Juliet? Where u trying to make Rhodey sound like Merciutio? That's what I thought! ;) I can't wait to finsh reading this story! ;)
| sunkissedvampire chapter 42 . 8/9/2010
Wow, one heck of a story you got here. I have no idea what your teachers were talking about when they said you werent detailed enough in your writing. You explain the emotional side of what's going on, something writers rarely do (at least on fanfiction) And it really is refreshing to read. This story was sad at points, but had me laughing at the simple moments when everyone got along, you easily wrote about some many problems other people have in this world and just as easily you explained how to move on from them. Yes, this fanfic did seem like a soap opera at points, and I hate soap operas, but I couldn't stop reading this, so congrats :D I stayed up till about 3 in the morning reading this stroy because I couldn't get enough of it. It was one heck of a rollercoaster ride. Please continue to write more stories.
P.s. If you practice on adding more of what's physicaly going on in your stories, you would probably turn out to be the most epic writer ever. XD
| Soap Lady chapter 42 . 6/7/2010
Hey now...I can't be responsible for you! You live two time zones away!
I just have the mental image of Gene having a life changing affirmation right before getting shot point blank in the head.
| XxThe Penny TreasurexX chapter 42 . 6/7/2010
:O! Wow! Wasn't expecting that but Awesome! I look forward to the sequel, and the finale of this:) Please update soon!
| Soap Lady chapter 41 . 4/27/2010
There you go, making me blush again. I'm sure chapter 42 will blow this out of the water.
| XxThe Penny TreasurexX chapter 41 . 4/27/2010
. . .Um...okay, werid...
| XxThe Penny TreasurexX chapter 40 . 4/26/2010
Aw, I'm really happy Gene's okay:) This chapter was a nice break from all the angst too. I look forward to all that will happen next. Please update soon!
| Soap Lady chapter 40 . 4/26/2010
I'LL SAY there'll be Hate Mail! Sure, Shoutan, Jagvi and Luksa are dynamic and interesting original characters but what does that matter? There is someone you've been seriously neglecting.
YOU KNOW who I mean.
When does Happy Hogan get HIS chapter, darnit?
*Pickets the story until Happy gets a chapter.*
Just kidding. Welcome back, Howard. We missed you.
| Dungeonwriter chapter 39 . 4/23/2010
Your story is addictive, well researched and brilliant. I started it in study hall for a brief break and went through it chapter by chapter, pondering how you could plunge each character to the depths of misery and then keep going, without engaging into melodrama. Your writing of Gene, the research into his culture...I am just so impressed with how fascinating and sad you made his background.
In other words, this is the best Armored Adventures story written. Ever.
| Soap Lady chapter 39 . 4/23/2010
Just when I think you can't get any better, you prove me wrong.
| The Mulberry chapter 39 . 4/21/2010
finally you used Linkin Park... now all you have to do is use In The End (by Linkin Park) P
| The Mulberry chapter 37 . 4/21/2010
dammit Rhodey, screw you. why? why do you have love pepper? why? Tony loves Pepper, Gene loves Pepper (i think), and now you have to go and freaking love her. Fuck you, Rhodey. You cut yourself and are in depression and almost to the line of f-in suicidal thoughts. freaking screw you. you just created a love square. you happy? dammit...
| XxThe Penny TreasurexX chapter 39 . 4/21/2010
*blinks* Wow...this...this chapter was incredible! I love how you put so much emotion in these chapters, especially this one. I loved the ending and I know Tony will never leave Gene. Even Pepper couldn't if she tried. I look forward to the next chapter. Please update soon!