Reviews for The Greatest Betrayal
Equilly chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
You did a beautiful job of portraying this change; you write so eloquently and you capture everything with the words you have :D
J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
"Yeargh! Can't a man get a pint around here?" "That's so cute! Look, he's trying to act all grown up again." Those kids skipping through time/universes, it must be so disorienting. I like your serious take on it, but had to lighten the mood a little.
The North Wyn chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Aww, poor guy. Good job!
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
interesting and sad
Whillenwolf chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I've never thought about it from this point of view - but I guess maybe that's why Peter "grew up" and never returned to Narnia. He probably felt that he was disillusioned.
omasuoniwabanshi chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Good point, that returning to childhood after having lived a full life would be horribly wrenching.

It's just so short though! I always want more when it's you writing something.
ManonLeChat chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Oh, bittersweet. I always wondered about how the Pevensie children felt when they were thrust back into childhood-childish emotions, childish hormones? Such a radical readjustment of their identities.