Reviews for Control
Rikku209 chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
It's so cute. I like it. It's good.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
I think it's the part where Mikan fell asleep while doing it with Natsume.
Anon chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
I love this! You're so good :D
EchiZaki chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Uhmmm that was sooo ahhh hot i like it whoo gotta whoo i love it
A-DiDDy101 chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Please pardon my language but while reading this the only thought's going through my head were 'what the f*** and I reading, what the h*** am I reading...'
I think it was really good but really funny.
mangaforevarr chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
3 hottt
iza chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
nice one love it yehey they will have a child i wish it is a twin boy and girl like your other story!:}
Pechay chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
gasp its nice gosh im a pervert!
dragonflyer30 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Awww cute and awsome way to torture natsume ! XD
hawtanimechic2000 chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
this is really funny. good lemon too!
HowdyDoody chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
I've read this before~

But I just realized~

Wasn't Natsume naked when he knelt down and asked Mikan to marry him~?


That's hilarious~
Baby Peach chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Loved it!I can't believe I just read that, it was so hot, I'm actually going to try Mikan's revenge as well. Thanks for the idea! Please write more stories with mikan and natsume, all the ones you write are so good!Thanks for the update and plz write more!
shineandshine chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
this story is damn hot!

keep up the good work!
nahia2008 chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
realy really good...nice ending btw
FromTheCanopyAbove chapter 1 . 6/22/2009

But I have to ask, where did you get the 'A.' for Mikan's middle name? Did you just go with a letter or something?
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