|Reviews for Second Chances|
| Cathrinee chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
You should consider a beta, there are alot of small typos, which are mainly just anoying :p I'm not trying to be negative, and its not your fault, but I've read to many typo stories this week :(
| Alice Cullen 1534 chapter 8 . 9/9/2009
| Dazzle Me Again chapter 8 . 6/18/2009
Okay, I'm gonna be one hundred percent honest with you. It was well written, and I love the idea of Edward turning from vampire to human, but you seriously lost points when you made Jacob rape Bella. That is definitely a no-no for me. I simply cannot stand the idea of Jacob doing that, or hurting Bella intentionally.
But, as we all know, this is fanfiction, and each author can do whatever they want with their stories. I'm just giving my opinion.
Have a wonderful day!
| me me me chapter 8 . 5/18/2009
i realy like this story because it was different but why did it have to end!
| j-brat chapter 7 . 5/16/2009
W-O-W! i love it. youre doing a really good job. I told myself that i would just read the first chapter for now and then go get a shower and go to work but i couldnt stop reading! really good job!1