|Reviews for With Love, Adrian|
| Luigenius chapter 9 . 1/6/2011
Alright, let's go through how I managed to find this awesome story.
I was on FF this morning, and a bit bored, so I started looking through some PW stuff for any kind of interesting finds involving Ace Attorney, and I stumbled upon a site called court records. I searched through that a bit and found a thread, made by you, for the purpose of fanwork. I went in there and found out that you had done fics for AA. I proceeded to click the link that, brought me back to FF. (which was already open in another window.) Interesting how I made that complete loop by accident. Anyways, as it turns out, I'm a HUGE Ace Attorney fan, and Edgeworth/Adrian is just about my favorite pairing. I read this fic, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
So to summarize, I started on . I searched through a site I'd never heard before, found you on that site, which led to you on this site, which led to a story of one of my favorite pairings. Interesting.
Anyways, that was a great story. Glad to see someone other than me is a Adrian/Edgey fan. Hopefully in Investigations 2 they bring Adrian back and let those two have some romance together. (That would just about make my day.) Excellent story. ;)
| Helleos chapter 9 . 6/3/2010
This was a very nice fic. I read through the whole thing in half an hour.
One thing to note though; both Edgeworth and Adrian are calm, reserved people that are bad with conveying their emotions. That's my impression of them anyway. It might've been better if you made them slightly more...how do I describe it? Quiet and less openly affectionate.
For example, I would imagine that Edgeworth would do his best to keep calm even if he's embarressed so in the second chapter, I picture him with a calm face, but an inconcealable blush.
All in all though, a good story.
| January51023 chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
I like this. It has the right feeling to it, like we're THERE with Edgeworth. The only problems I have are that you occassionally use verbs that would be more appropriate in another location, for example:
"Edgeworth, nearly at the verge of freaking out,"
"Edgeworth, nearly on the verge of freaking out,"
But this is extremely well written. Back in my days as a newbie I admired people like you and your writing styles. This is excellent, keep up the good work, and thank you very much for your own review of my fanfic!
| Indochine chapter 9 . 4/26/2009
It's the second time I read a Miles/Adrian, (the first was on the kink meme) and it really interests me. I don't ship them but anyway...
I liked your story a lot. It was well written and all. So a good story. I like particularly in the last chapter "Goodbye Celeste, goodbye Juan and goodbye Matt."
Really it was good!