Reviews for This Could Hurt
The Cake Genius chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Dafuq, Shuichi! XD It's hilarious because Shuichi is the uke-est uke ever (besides Ayase from Okane ga Nai, but he is exempt), so yeah... Pretty much, it's genius.
bbsugarxx chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Hahaha I loved how the characters were ooc it really worked in this. I could have done with more smexy lemon but ill forgive you... Maybe...

Awh please write more! I. Need. To. Read. Moreeee! :D

Katie - Lyn Della Robia chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Charlie Waffles chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Haha this was SO OOC! Yuki would NEVER let Shuichi be seme.
Funky Bracelet Chick chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Everyone likes bondage! i lol'd. ]]
rainfall chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
aw i wish u continued XD haha
Sinful Princess chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Nice! We need a chapter 2! *may write it for you* _" lol
TheWitchBaby chapter 1 . 9/6/2009



*reads again*


... question...WHERES THE YAOI?

(For reals though, I liked it...but seriously wheres the yaoi?)
Lexi chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
I don't like Seme Shuichi. lol... The ending quote made me frown a little ... No way would Shu say that. Thats too out of character (OOC) and Yuki is out of character to. He's far to... There I say it... KIND to Shu. O.o

You should have put this in a warning before hand.

"That's it. Turn over. I'm gonna rape you." - Erm. I think Yuki would have been offended. Because he actually was Raped! And Shuichi was(Implied) by lazy eyes and them two goons of his that he hired.

"Doesn't he want to cuddle?" - Shouldn't that be obvious to Shu? Yuki is a cold hearted bastard, lol.

It was an okay read though...
Chomps the Insane chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
0_0 SHuichi... seme... Never thought about it.. Hmm...
Stranger9195 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Oh, COME ON! You can't stop there! :(
Cumcakesxxxx chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Shuichi-seme doesn't really seem to be in his character, but interesting. I've never seen Gravitation-bondage, so cutos for being first! xD hah, but it seems really OC for Yuki to be uke, especially, especially in this sort of situation. I'm not really one of those people who think "roles" are what it's all about, but Shuichi doesn't even have enough control on his own LIFE to be the dom in a S&M situation. He's spastic, and moody, and an over-all clutz. Character traits slip into all situations, so I don't see how he could be dominant at all. Especially in this sort of play where the master has control of everything, and composure is key. Yuki is almost like the master of the universe, he has everything and everyone (especially Shuichi) as his fingertips. He has perfect, strenght, composure, ect. so especially for first time play, it just seems like...they're not them. Like the characters aren't who they're supposed to be.
Meekemofreak chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
lol awesome! XD

naughty shuichi.

Undead Gothic Princess chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
now that was awsome!

please do a sequal xx
Gothic Anime Lover chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
You went through all the trouble of writing a bondage fic, but you couldn't even give us one lemon! *cries in a corner*
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