|Reviews for Princess of Tennis|
| Guest chapter 44 . 10/3/2014
I think your story is pretty good-you have a nice writing style and you don't overload your readers with excessive imagery, which is a relief. However, I think next time you create OCs, you shouldn't base them on canon characters. I noticed that your OCs are very like the Seigaku regulars. That's not a bad thing, a lot of authors do it, it's just my personal opinion. Sakuno's tennis skills surprised me, but yeah, she was a lot like that in the manga and the anime completely butchered her. The romance was a bit too fluffy and unrealistic for my taste, but then again that's just me. Well done for writing a nice story. I'm going to read the sequel now!
| the girl from back then chapter 44 . 10/2/2014
Hi! I'm new to the POT fanfiction archive, so I had NO IDEA what fics to read. Then somebody recommended yours to me, and I really don't regret reading it. Your writing is really light-hearted and fun. I think that's refreshing considering the amount of seriousness and angst in other fics I've read (mine has a lot of seriousness and angst too T.T every time I read my story I wonder why I'm so mean to my characters) Your romance scenes are so sweet. I can't write romance at all. I usually end up wanting to puke on my laptop because I can't write cheesy stuff. I'm so jealous ;) Your characters are super endearing as well. It's like Seigaku except girl version!
Okay off to read the Nationals arc now.
| Loveislife649455 chapter 44 . 4/25/2014
Hey apparently I loved the fix it was so good and interesting I couldn't stop reading the chapters. I had to reread it to actually have a good compose but I remember every detail that you wrote and just to say it's awesome mostly with the ryosaku and u should write the 2part
| orangecho chapter 44 . 3/10/2014
hahaha, this is really good. I'm going to read the national arc now ]
| Guest chapter 33 . 12/30/2013
Why don't you draw a picture of each female regular? I can't imagine them but I'm sure it'll be very lovely.
| magicdemi-god223 chapter 43 . 1/1/2014
It is official. This story is making it into the favorites list :-) I rather like how you didn't make Tezuka's love interest into a stone. All the OC pairings I actually like involve his love interest being either a) a stone - aka someone who's stoic all the time. Or b) so shy she can't talk to him.
I really like how you've portrayed the character though I am curious as to whatRyuu's real purpose is. Then, across the chapters I noticed several grammar mistakes and mispelled words. I think you should go over some of them because some were kinda confusing.
Of all the girls, I definitely love Katou the best.
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/29/2013
Hahahahahahahahahahahaha! The rules and story behind the rules are so funny!
| Jigoku Shoujo Sakuno chapter 33 . 12/30/2013
I looked up the Japanese name thingy and saw that my Japanese name is Saruwatari (monkey on a crossing bridge) Kumiko (eternal beauty child) or Akimoto (true autumn) Ayumu (walk, deeper meaning: walk your own way). It saids family name first, so it's Saruwatari Kumiko. Weird, right?
All other reviewers, you guys should also go to that site. It's in AquaJet's bio.
| Jigoku Shoujo Sakuno chapter 23 . 12/30/2013
Fuji's such a sadist, yet so cute *drooling over chibi Fuji in a dress (from episode 115)*! Ryoma is, too, although forced to take the Cinderella role in place of Kirihara. It's in episode 8 Pairpuri. Fuji in a dress can put us girls to shame.
| Jigoku Shoujo Sakuno chapter 15 . 12/30/2013
Yep, Hazue is in one of the episodes, but he is not a elementry schooler, although he is (maybe) in the anime. I think he's a middle schooler in your story, but I'm not sure
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/21/2013
Anyways, I think this story is good, a lot more funnier than the other Princess of Tennis.
| Guest chapter 22 . 8/13/2013
FINALLY! a chapter for Sakuno! reading about OC's gets my gut... but u do a great job!
Kawaii - Chan
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/13/2013
... -(_)- so FUNNY! I loved this chappie, can't wait to read the others!
| MatchMakerSawa-chan chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
| Ryosaku-chan chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Your story is so interesting.