Reviews for Expecting the Unexpected
Dionysus S chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Those two getting along was certainly the best part of this, I think. Oh, and Popuri's language too. Now THAT was hilarious.

I love how you write Kai and Rick's interactions with each other. Those two will never cease to make me laugh. Hehehehe, predictable or not, great job on this. And I hope you do well in the contest!

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Icefire149 chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
i really liked this! i can't believe you gave him pink hair! omg that is just too cute and funny at the same time! good luck in the contest
Jean Cooper chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
I agree with you- as if pink hair wasnt bad enough on the poor kid xD

But I loved it, I really did. Just the image of the two in the waiting room is enough to make you want to draw a picture- to bad I have no skillz like you xD

Kudos on this and good luck in the contest. Talk to you later
Eve Pomme chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
Aw... I can just see it now:

Bob:Hi, I'm Bob! Who are you?

Ashley:I'm Ashley!

And then Bob walked away laughing to play with Tom, Hank, and Bill.

Great story! Love it and keep up the fantastic work!
high improbability chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
Ashley is such a cute name! .

Yay, Kai-Rick family drama! I love the drama brought on by Kaipuri, and this is one of the few stories in the archive that tells it. 5/5!