Reviews for The Wellspring
Eboni chapter 28 . 12/19/2016
...and it's not finished. **Cries**

Thank you for sharing such a well thought out, well written story. I love how Dean takes on a fatherly role versus an older brother role in this, since the kid are so young. And Sam really is like the wife and mother at times. Their family dynamics are hilarious. And Alec... is perfect. His language, attitude, the way he plays people and steals as a career, and Dean's amusement and Sam's irritation made this story for me. It is also the perfect contrast for Ben who is well behaved, with high morals and who is openly troubled.

This world you've created is fabulous and I hope one day you'll write more in it. Take care! Oh yeah, and I have to give you props for the "naughty bed"-LOL
ManicTater chapter 28 . 5/4/2016
This is the second time I read this. Still love it.
ManicTater chapter 6 . 5/1/2016
3 Deans. Omg. Still freaking funny the second time around.
reader50 chapter 28 . 11/25/2015
I loved this story. I laughed, I cried, I thought AAAWWWW. It was angsty, it was funny, it had action, and I loved, loved, loved it. You are a good writer, you made me feel for these characters. Kudos to you. Thank you so much for sharing your story with all of us, for letting us know what you think, for putting yourself out there for rejection or acceptance. Thank you.
reader50 chapter 5 . 11/24/2015
When Dean and Sam found a witch's place with a hanging dead rabbit and Dean mentions something about the bunny dying, he sounded upset for the bunny. My thought then was that Dean was not only a big marshmallow for kids but for animals also. So it doesn't really surprise me that Dean did not want to skin and gut the hare he shot. Plus, I know that on the series Sam is usually the one that acts so compassionate. But let's face it, he didn't get into hunting to help people like Dean did, he got into for revenge like his dad. Sam always acts nicer but he is much more dispassionate and colder than Dean, in my opinion. Thank you for sharing.
reader50 chapter 4 . 11/24/2015
I loved this chapter. I laughed when Dean told Alec not to hit the car but hit Sam if he was mad. So funny. I laughed again when Dean jingled the keys in front of Alec like you would a cat. HAHAHA!
Thank you for sharing.
reader50 chapter 3 . 11/24/2015
I loved that Dean liked that Alec was a clone instead of his child, I completely understood. I also appreciated his joke about being able to harvest Alec's organs if he needed and that Alec understood the joke too. Thank you for sharing.
reader50 chapter 2 . 11/24/2015
You write well. I can just see Sam and Dean's characters acting like you wrote. Poor Alec, sounded like he was really sick. To bad we don't know how he got to the hospital-if he managed to get there himself or if someone found him. I'm loving this. Thank you for sharing.
reader50 chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
I like this.
Guest chapter 28 . 11/17/2015
You made me cry. Be proud of that fact. I don't cry for much, but this was so touching. I love it.
reader50 chapter 28 . 9/21/2015
Loved it! I loved that Sam and Dean argued a lot because that's what brothers do. I loved that Alec was so adorable and awesome. I started reading and couldn't stop till the story ended. It had angst, it had fluff, it had plot and left me wanting more. Thanks for sharing your story.
AJ Granger chapter 28 . 9/12/2015
This story is amazing. You write these characters so well, Supernatural should hire you as a writer for the show. I love the interactions between the brothers, and the aspects of parenting and fatherhood. Dean would make a great dad. He did an excellent job with Sam, and even with Ben he was really good.

I am intrigued by the tracker. I hope that she is on their side, and that the brothers are able to accept her help. I am concerned that if they know the brothers past, they will know about Bobby and his salvage yard. He's been a connection to the family for a long time.

Then again, I look forward to what the brothers and Bobby may do to take down Manticore or make things better. There are others on the loose, and a community of hunters out there. I don't know if you've given up on this piece or not, but I hope you find your muse and do more with it. It deserves it.
TheMysteriousComicGeek chapter 28 . 8/18/2015
Seriously, Please complete this story. You're one of the most cleverest writers I have come across on fanfiction in a long time. I absolutely love supernatural and Dark Angel and have read this story over and over again along with every oneshot you have written. I even found your livejournal in hopes to read more of your work. I'm absolutely obsessed with the Winchesters raising Ben and Alec because of your story. Lol.
In fact, you inspired me to write my own Dark Angel/Supernatural fanfiction using a similar formula to your own. You're just talented all around with your imagery and dialogue and the way you portray emotions. I just wish you would finish it. I need to read what happens to this tiny family and read future fics about Alec and Ben growing up as hunters. It would be epic. I just love how you've written Alec and Ben. So in character, yet incredibly different from their adult versions in Dark Angel.
You can see with a solid family life, how they could be different and more heroic in the future. How Alec's selfish tendencies would disappear as he tried to walk in his father's and uncle's footsteps. How Ben would believe in the tangible. The people who are real and support him in his journey through adulthood. It would be fascinating to see how his and Max's interactions would be different. How the hostility would change. It would also be interesting to see Rachel Berrisford. Maybe their meeting completely different than in Dark Angel. How Ben's involvement in Alec's life would change. It would be interesting to read about Castiel's involvement and Ellen and Jo's. Adam. To meet different Transgenics like Biggs or Cece. How the Winchesters would liberate the transhumans and Manticore's other progeny. I just love this story!
I could go on for pages, but I guess I'll cut off hear. I don't even know if you still write fanfiction, though I wish you would. I understand writer's block. Thank you for this incredible tale.
ALonesomeAuthor chapter 28 . 11/30/2014
I really hope that you will finish this story. It has been one of the best I've had the pleasure of reading. I know that it's been nearly five years now but I'm still hoping that you will continue it. Great job on what you have written.
deadly embrace chapter 28 . 8/27/2014
You know nothing would better than you completing this story even though its been four years it is still in my top 5 stories on this website and it would be perfect for you to finish with more one shots in the series god I love this story and you have finished it on another website please put it in an authors note or on your profile page with web address please xxxxx D.E xxxxx . P.S thank you for you brilliance.:) ;) :P :)
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