|Reviews for Shael o pai shar si shal, si ber eir thys tysi|
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 3/8
Isn't Lucius already married? He has a son, after all.
| Jadriel92 chapter 5 . 6/9/2014
Turns out that James Potter's Middle name is Charles and Lily Evans middle name is Rose.
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/21/2014
It's called crucio.
| BSolomon chapter 23 . 3/11/2014
yes this is still a very good story
| sevvyboy1fangirl chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
| asdf chapter 18 . 4/4/2013
| name chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
| ShatteredDragon chapter 31 . 11/13/2012
OK MY SUGGESTION DO ANOTHER (sorry about the caps dont know how that got turned on) trial chapter with dumbledore and the dursleys all in one then an epilogue where they all have their babies there really isnt much more i can think of to add to this story really its pretty perfect the way it is
| ShatteredDragon chapter 23 . 11/13/2012
at the end of chapter 23 you called her hermione nott just thought you might wanna change that since thats just cruel to theo nott since hes a good guy
| Azrael Jinsei chapter 31 . 9/29/2012
I'm sorry your muse has left you. Try rereading what you've already wrote, it has been over two years, you should be able to come up with something. If not Sev could be put up as a possible candidate for the Headmaster position.
Thank you so much for writing this. Good luck with finding your muse.
| Kuma In Pink chapter 31 . 12/20/2011
I'd like to make a couple of suggestions:
Have Dumbledore and his little cronies escape and kidnap/torture Harry. .
| tellmamatobuggeroff chapter 31 . 7/18/2011
Okay, so if I were you I would just write the trial of Dumbledore and the rest of the main gangs pregnancies. The story doesn' have to be jam packed with drama. Also, it seems you haven't posted in a while, so if you are interested I would like to adopt this story.
| tellmamatobuggeroff chapter 8 . 7/18/2011
Just wanted to say (and hopefully there are people that already pointed it out) the unforgivable curse is 'crucio' not 'curio'.
| noelnoel2 chapter 31 . 6/11/2011
I have read loads of fanfiction starting with Lord of the Rings and now stuck mostly on Harry Potter. And I can tell you that this story was quite a ride and not a failure.
But stories have a natural ending. It seems to me that after Dumbledore goes down all that is needed is one last chapter with a few lines about Fudge being replaced and a few quick scenes of babies being born ending in Harry's and an upbeat endearing ending.
Then you are FREEEEEE to explore a new idea. Truth is, you are Free rignt now. What you write is a gift and we don't get to chose what story you work on. I can't believe you are in high school except for the "french" in your dialogue and a few misspellings that really don't matter much. Except vial is spelled vial not vile; for some reason that bugs me. :-p
Well, it's 2:21 am here, signing off to fight insomnia..
thank you for a good read, i may finish it in a dream so there!
| TWILIGHTICE chapter 30 . 6/6/2011
Maby you could have a spanking scene