Can someone help me find a story? A vampire kidnaps a woman and her two children and genetically makes them into vampires like him. He brainwashes her into thinking he’s been her husband the whole time. I think it was a twilight fanfic

Finest crafted Twilight author who includes footnotes and sources notes.
This is an amazing story with historical scenes throughout the book.
Tremendous depth if characters filling in the gaps from the Meyer's books.

What a brilliant gem.
Bravo
Reb

It is so good to read real writing. Thank you.

Oh, that last line! Snot-sobbing here!

Wow!

I haven’t even finished this chapter and I’ve had to remind myself to breathe several times! On I gogasp! . . .

Whoa!

Ooh...this is so much better played than in the original!

I can practically hear the melody in my mindThe strangest strata of thought. It came like piano notes. One dark. One light. One High. One low.” Beautiful. Then you add texture to the sound and twist your metaphorOne with a shivering base. And then a sharp tenor.” Not a soprano, I noticed. No, you know that would be musically trite

Oh my word, Edward and the spider!

I love how you’ve made Edward work for his car and let us see his difficulties in the process. Gritty and character-infused.

Ooh!

My reading of your story has been broken up into small chunks so far, so I apologize for the lack of review of the first two chapters. Your use of detail and research is so gripping (and just generally impressive for fic).

And the eyeletgoodness, so evocative!

The slang use is cool. I am liking this fic. Why is it horror though? Maybe next chapter will clue me in.