I liked this story so much. It's just sad that ended here :(

I love the depth your giving Bella's character. I feel that the Twilight Saga was very plot driven and that that plot was driven by the romance of Edward and Bella. I thought that the characters in the series had a whole lot of hidden depth that never really got to be explored because of circumstance and romance. When you think about it, Bella and Edward don't love each other any more than any of the Cullen couples, but plot put them on a platform and forever Bella to come across as more needy and obsessed than I'm sure her character would be when relaxed. I like that you dive more into her character and show that she's really not as one dimensional as people make her out to be.

I really like your story ! Thank you. It was very nice to be on edward side and to guess if bella knew or not about the vampire.

Great story sad about Charlie though

So I rather suspect that you are over the whole twific thing...but wanted you to know that this is a truly awesome story. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Xxx T

Candles represent Jesus symbolically the Light of the world. Enlightening the sole in the way of rightiousness and faith. "His light shall lead. Many Christian texts refer to the light, namely Jesus/God
The receiving of a candle is also symbolic as accepting Jesus into your heart, the giving of a candle during a Christian service is symbolic of acceptance or welcome to the faith such as in baptism. The parents and godparents accept a candle ...being the light that accepting Jessus as our saviour
brings on behalf of the one being baptised. Faith, belonging, love a promise of a life everlasting all in a lit candle, also a meadure of preparation to a special specific church celebration such as the Advevt candleBy praying in front of a candle we light the church with his presence. I am not fanatical in my faith, quite modest actually however I enjoy understanding the alegorical quality and querks within my faith

thanks for completing and sharing this AMAZING! little story for us ;D

This is one of the best fan fictions I've probably ever read. So glad I found it. It's like a diamond in the rough. I don't even know what to say, except for that you're a hell of a writer. And this story brought me so much joy and fear and grief all at once. For a vampire story, it's very human. Favourited.

why would Edward assume bella would be ok with his nasty lips on hers? He makes out with jealous murderers and touches his penis to naked sperm dumpsters. couldn't it have been NORMAL woman he was with not nasty skanks

what the fuck is a hard boiled slav?

Edward seemed to know that tanwhore was sending him porn...he rushed upstairs AND he turned off the volume to the dvd before he played it. And I'm left wondering if Tanya is such a whore why would he be turned on by the thought of fucking her? why would he "distract" himself with that whore fingering herself when there is a wide world of internet porn at his disposle...and if hes physically attracted to the ugliest denali...why not just be with her? because she doesn't "understand" him? LOL ya right...so its ok to lust and be creepy but not ok to actually fuck? I'm confused. and pretty much disgusted with Edward. the old lady they got to play Tanya was so fucking ugly...AND shes the biggest whore on the planet

Brilliant story.

Many thanks for a well-crafted and different take on the pre-Twilight story. You are a very good writer and I hope/presume you will be in print one day. Congratulations x

Glazing - I would have thought preventing bacteria multiplying was a good idea. And yes, everything you eat has bacteria on it.

Oh, vampire sex! Awesome way to end.
Great story! I can't believe I'm just reading now
Xoxo hope you write more!