Interesting dive in Edward’s mind

I love Edward and Jasper's bickering. You don't get to read about that much in both canon and other twifics. I like the fact that even between everything that's going on, you still manage to include some brother or family time.

Awhh... did Dorothy write a story about "Bograd the Michigan Merman,"?
Hmmm I'm curious now though, how would Mermanward be like?
lollll, now im off to resume reading the chapter

This was very well written. Your use of language and grammar was very satisfying, and any mistakes were few and far between. The plot was a good one too, very different. I liked this fic immensely. Well done.

If I were Edward, I’d be planning to dismember Alice when it’s all said and done. Jasper can deal with putting her pieces back together.

It's LEWD, not LUDE.

the writing, the memories of his past, the humor, and the foot notes have been such a godsend. i'm saddened there are only 13 chapters but i can't seem to stop myself from steamrolling through to the end.

Can someone help me find a story? A vampire kidnaps a woman and her two children and genetically makes them into vampires like him. He brainwashes her into thinking he’s been her husband the whole time. I think it was a twilight fanfic

Finest crafted Twilight author who includes footnotes and sources notes.
This is an amazing story with historical scenes throughout the book.
Tremendous depth if characters filling in the gaps from the Meyer's books.

What a brilliant gem.
Bravo
Reb

It is so good to read real writing. Thank you.

Oh, that last line! Snot-sobbing here!

Wow!

I haven’t even finished this chapter and I’ve had to remind myself to breathe several times! On I gogasp! . . .

Whoa!