Reviews for UNDERCOVER
Aura Laths chapter 10 . 3/9/2012
bwha ha ha ha oh and nuuu bella cant be with edwards
Deleted53926 chapter 10 . 5/3/2010
absolutely amazing!
loupants chapter 10 . 2/17/2010
What Fiery Red Hair chapter 10 . 11/3/2009
HidingInACorner chapter 6 . 10/20/2009
I get it- she's fat. And for someone who is 5"9', 190 lbs isn't morbidly obese, and certainly doesn't warrent the constant reminders of how 'fat' she is. Frankly, it is extremely annoying.
Azlady2003 chapter 10 . 10/15/2009
wow please update soon
anna123 chapter 10 . 10/12/2009
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more! :D
emzigale07 chapter 10 . 10/11/2009
Yay, I was so glad to see you had updated, I had half convinced myself it was going to be one of those awful AN chapters were writers say they've given up on their story, so as you can imagine I was so glad to see it wasnt. I'm looking forward to going back to Bella's pov, as much as I love Alice and how helpful her pov is to understanding everything, I like seeing things from witch Bella's pov and I do like how you've changed her to fit your story. o0o0o, cant wait to find out what happened, Bella ran away from the ward as herself and apparated, where to, alice said something about bella beeing at Port Angeles (spelled wrong I know) today, is that where she went, if so why? It was great this chapter, so eventful and long, I cant wait to find out what happens next, Bella is back as charlotte again, what happened? I so0o0o wanna know. However, I did pick up on a few errors, ' but it can’t talk or20make conversation with it' just the unecessary '20' there, it was only minor errors like that every now and again, dont worry too much about it. I'd be your beta, but I'm really not very good with grammer, my own stories are kind of bad for it. sorry. Great chapter, I really hope your next update is soon! :) x
BriseisRose chapter 10 . 10/11/2009
Yikes! Alice is so confused right now. And poor Edward, he doesn't know the love of his life is right there.
bookluvrxoxo chapter 10 . 10/11/2009
i like this ooc bella...i usually think that they are more interesting then the bella we know...keep up the good work and update soon!
newgirl5 chapter 10 . 10/11/2009
ok... um... im guessing she went to port angeles to see fred? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
life23 chapter 10 . 10/11/2009
oh please continue super fast i love this hurry!
ElCullen chapter 10 . 10/11/2009
I seriously loved the chapter! I'm glad you're back! Update soon!1
EdwardCullenManiac4Eva chapter 10 . 10/11/2009
Oh! I love it! I cant wait to find out what happens next! I want to know where Bella went and what happened to her!

Please Update Soon!

Love Ya All

heatherV83 chapter 9 . 9/23/2009
This is a great story! Do you think you will have another chapter up any time soon?
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