Reviews for Beach
neth911 chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
uhm...so where the heck is Crow?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Chapter 2
darkyami1214 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
It would be great if there was a kiss scene. But ah well. '_'

Anyways beside that the story was great. I also loved how you kept the everyone in character. A lot of people put everyone out of character.

Anyways loved it. (:
serpenscape chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Good job! I liked it!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
when r they going to kiss r u going to make a 2 one i like the book
Larissa chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
I thought it was cute! I was exspecting a kiss at the end though. But it was cute anyway!
talim chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
The ending was my favorite part . It's was kinda inconclusive but very sweet. If u ever have time u should make a sequal 2 it.
Kelisidina chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
Plot is original, deliverance is good though could be improved.

I like the theme, very fun and light. Elaboration was good too.

There is something to be done about grammar and a bit on spelling. Also, it's Godwin. xD;

there are a few errors here and there, but that comes naturally to a beginner, but I think you have what it takes )
Lin chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
Godwin not Goodwin