|Reviews for The Piece that Holds Us Together|
| The Thorned Rose chapter 12 . 7/2
I absolutely loved this story! Good job!
| FoxyWolf2 chapter 1 . 3/20
I love this story! I reread it all the time and the story before this one, Thank You. Your really a good writer, keep up the good work!
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/16/2013
Best Yugioh Fanfic Ever! Awesome Job! 3
| Liwliwa-Janoah chapter 12 . 7/7/2013
What does T.T. mean?
"Good...that means she will be intimidating." Seto stated proudly
"Even to you?" She arched her brow
"I am in for a battle...but it's one I am looking forward to." He smirked
"She is definitely daddy's little girl." She smiled
Ha ha ha
Ha..Mazia means Angel? Wow! I love how it’s his mother’s name.
Mazia Tea Kaiba…wow! She gave the baby her name as a middle name.
Never mind, you switched that up on me. SO that’s why you were using Anzu all this time…instead of Tea…
Yea...we didn't come here to see you losers we came here to see the star." Mai joked LOL! Mai is full of jokes!
And your pet dog Joey…LMAO!
Although the first two months were tough because Seto would sometime refuse to let them near her. He would tell them to blame Joey because he was full of fleas and since they hung out with him, they too were infected. This only sparked another comical insult war between the two. Anzu giggled to herself at the thought. WOW!
Single white rose and a velvet box…hmmm I wonder what’s inside?
Interesting, he’s talking about their sex anniversary.
AWWW Seto you remembered the night…we uh…conceived our daughter…
"It's invalid because we never consummated the marriage." He smirked. "Now tell me Anzu...what do you supposed we do about this?" He said huskily wrapping his arms around her waist. things are heating up!
They’re lucky that she let them make love. I find it very coincidental that as soon as they were finished she started to cry.l I want my daddy cry…she prefers me anyway…WOW!
I knew the baby would be the piece that held them together as the title implied. Sweet ending to an AMAZING STORY! SUPERB JOB! Sad that it ended, but all good things must come to an end.
| Liwliwa-Janoah chapter 11 . 7/7/2013
"Of course I do. You know...your fashion sense is a little off. But your looks make up for it." she brought him another tie and placed it around his neck. Ha ha ha
"Walking limit reached...get back into bed." That was awesome!
LMAO! "You don't wobble. However...you do kind of walk like a penguin." He smirked. I honestly thought he was gonna say something nice!
I mean the doctor placed me on bed rest with limited walking, and Seto practically has me strapped to the bed!"
"Ohh...sounds exciting hon!" Mai has a dirty mind.
Of course I have though about it! I think about it often...wait that didn't come out right." She blushed
"Yes it did...you little minx! The first response is always the best response!"
Tea you’re caught!
"I see...you two aren't really going for the whole marriage based on love...but a marriage based on lust...Sounds exciting." ha ha ha
So forget the saying 'never go to bed angry'. You should always go to bed angry." She giggled WOW!
Your chair is more comfortable than our bed." Well that is interesting.
Yes. And seeing that we are the only ones here, what do you say we continue our earlier activities? After I am done...I guarantee you won't even remember this storm." He leaned in and whispered in her ear and smirked. WOW! Doesn’t he hear, that they have to leave? There’s no time for sex.
Until the main power is restored the building is on lock down." is he for real?
On top of which, you need to get out of those wet clothes." he said.
"Well what...would you...recommend? I didn't...bring anything else...to wear, seeing as I was not expecting...to go into labor!" she panted _ ha ha ha
Oh well that's just perfect! AAAHHH! I think she wants to be born out of my back instead of the right way! AAAAAHHH! Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha" she exhales. The contraction came to a stop and she relaxed a bit. LMAO! Out of her back...LOL!
Seto...use the scissors a cut her out" She said
"What! Do you know how crazy you sound?" Ha ha ha
"Come on little one just turn a little bit more for us...come on you can do it" he spoke to his daughter. AWWWW
Anzu listen to me...stop saying that you can't. I've seen you in tough situations and you can do whatever the hell you want to do now push this baby out!" You tell her!
She's perfect...we did good...she is beautiful." awww
There will be more" he mumbled hmmm. Tea get ready! I can’t believe the baby was born in his office...wow!
| Liwliwa-Janoah chapter 10 . 7/6/2013
"Mokuba call our personal doctor and tell him to meet us at the hospital now! And if he is not there when we get there then he is fired! WOW!
His heart stopped when he saw her…but face down..unconscious..wow
Anzu...I am so sorry" he whispered. 'I swear that bastard is going to pay for what he has done. You and the baby are going to make it through this...I don't know what I would do if I lost either of you. Anzu...you make me feel things that I am not supposed to feel. You are the only one who has ever had the guts to stand up to me. You make me laugh, something I haven't done in years. I enjoy arguing with you even over the little things. We would get off subject and forget what the hell we were even arguing about in the first place. I can't picture my life without you. I lo...' he was about to finish his thought but a loud voice interrupted him. I love his confession!
"Don't you ever...as long as there is air flowing through your lungs insinuate that I would do anything to harm Anzu or my child is that clear?!" Kaiba yelled putting as much venom in his voice as he possibly could. BOOM! Let’s get ready to rumble!
Sir please just let us do our job." The nurse went back inside and closed the door. Kaiba was about to lose what little control he had left if his brother hadn't hugged him. That is so sweet!
I forgot to mention that Mokuba laying his head on Tea’s stomach was very sweet!
HUH! Kaiba has a hit man on speed dial. That is unsettling.
Now how does he know that they’re having a girl? Interesting.
He is sneaky! He paid the nurse to find out the gender…but it’s sweet that he’s already done the nursery.
Oh, so Kaiba doesn’t have a hit man on speed dial..I feel better. The man called Tea a slut? Well I never! HMPH! Kaiba punched him, but injured his own hand in the process.
Honestly, she’s addicted to those milkshakes.
Great Chapter! Poor Takanaka…
| Liwliwa-Janoah chapter 9 . 7/6/2013
All I have to say is, why isn’t he going to find out the sex of the baby with her? And now he gets a business proposition? Interesting. My question is, are they still in high school? No one talked about graduation…
AWWW! They’re having a girl! Way to make Kaiba into a total sweet heart!
"Really! Wow...Seto is going to spoil her I just know it. She is definitely gonna be daddy's little girl." AWWW!
"Aww. Look at the happy couple...You two color coordinated how sweet." Mokuba smiled. _
"I am going to the ladies room." She said
"Again?" he looked at her
"Well I would hold it, but it's damn near impossible seeing that there is a child sitting on my bladder." She glared at him.
_ the joys of an expectant mother…
I knew she shouldn’t have taken that water…I really hope she’s not losing the baby..or going into premature labour. Mokuba doesn’t listen. There’s a reason you’re brother said to go home!
WOW! So Takanak’s trying to kill the baby and Tea?
Amazing chapter! Danger!
| Liwliwa-Janoah chapter 8 . 7/6/2013
Every night he would wait until she was asleep to climb into bed with her. Not she was complaining. He would cuddle her every night as they slept. She loved sleeping in his arms. He had no idea that she was aware of his presence. In the mornings, he would wake up before her, as if he were never there. Sneaky little sucker! What’s so bad in your wife, knowing that you care?
Mokuba is funny! He finds their bickering entertaining.
her husband Seto Kaiba, came into the bedroom sweating from an intense morning workout session. (A/N: What? You think he got that hot body just from playing duel monsters? LOL) HA ha ha! Of course not! Duel monsters isn’t athletic.
You can't even run your own bath water?"
"Don't be ridiculous...now unless you are going to get in here with me, close the door you letting the heat out."
LOL! They’re a married couple, who hasn’t seen each other naked…since they got married…..wow
"So what? It's not like we haven't seen each other naked before." He walked over toward her and leaned so close to her that she was laying on her back with him over her. "And trust me...there isn't an inch of you I haven't seen." He finished huskily. OMG!
She took her legs and wrapped them around his waist. wrapping your legs around his waist, is what got you into this in the first place.
It means that you can't seduce me. I am the dominate one in the bedroom remember?" ha ha ha
"You shouldn't finger that thing so hard...it might break." She smirked
"Well...something's require hard fingering." He smirked back.
"Why Seto...I had no idea you were so dirty"
"What are you talking about? I was simply pointing out that this was a brand new computer and the keys are not loose yet...now whose being dirty."
Seto Kaiba JR can go either way? HA HA HA!
I love how he’s so attentive. Give her aching legs a massage.
Just wait a second. It maybe a little early but I can already tell this baby has your attitude...he or she doesn't really like command performances." Ha
AWWWW The baby likes him!
"Excuse me Mr. and Mrs. Kaiba forgive me for my intrusion...but I have your chocolate milkshake and your double chocolate chip cookies you asked for Mrs. Kaiba." the maid walked in.
"Oh excellent...thank you" Anzu smiled
"Hold on take that back and bring her a smoothie and some fruit." Seto stated.
"Wait just a minute...I don't want a smoothie I want a milkshake and my cookies!"
"You don't need all that sugar and I will be damned if my kid is going to be bouncing off the walls."
"But that is what I want." Whiny face!
"It's not good for you or the baby." Their little debate is entertaining.
Umm...I think you are confused about whose father you are...here is a hint, you aren't mine." ha ha ha
"Hn...How can you say that you know you're my favorite." Ha..their debates are so entertaining. But I loved that he said she’s his favourite.
"Eww...Get a room you two...we have plenty just pick one; except mine of course! Mokuba joked.
"Uh... Hi Mokuba, your brother and I were just talking." She nervously said.
"What kind of talking were you two doing?" Mokuba stated scrunching his nose up
Mokuba is hilarious!
Okay to start things off...Why were you so modest because you seen him naked in the shower. I mean I don't see the shock. Now unless you two were fully clothed when you were fucking, I don't see the problem." LMAO! Tell her Mai!
Well...hon when you have that baby...you better wire your legs shut...cause your gonna get it! She burst into laughter. LMAO! Kaiba’s gonna be going HAMMER! LMAO!
She made sure, she got that milkshake.
Oh please! Who are you trying to fool? The sexual tension between you two is sharp enough to cut through metal. And who knew Kaiba had a soft side yet alone a playful side?" Sharp enough to cut through metal…wow! Once that baby is born…they’ll be REALLY busy!
"Keep lying to yourself hon. I mean it's obvious that he loves you... If he didn't he wouldn't show you the side of him that no one sees...you know the human side. Look at the evidence, you tease each other, you two can't keep your hands off each other... Anzu, the man spoons you every night...need I go on? " "And since when does Kaiba fool around?" Mai you tell her!
I do love him...I have always loved him even before Battle City. But can I bring my self to tell him? How do I know if he even feels the same? OOOO! Realisation!
| Liwliwa-Janoah chapter 7 . 7/6/2013
For a person who’s doing this for fun, I your “fun”…this story is amazing!
He couldn't get the kiss out of his head. 'What the hell is wrong with me? Why would I kiss her? Why is it that when I am around her my heart races? Maybe this marriage could turn into something more than it should? Hn...I am becoming soft! But then again...the softness of her lips, her taste, her scent, her smile, it's almost as if I am falling for her. I can't be falling for her...I will not fall for her...Seto Kaiba falls for no one!' he growled to himself. You’ll fall for her…trust that! Nothing is wrong with you, you just love her.
Mokuba made me laugh! "Yes I do...and I would be honored...better go work on my speech!" Mokuba ran out of the office.
over and over again.
'Why did he kiss me? It felt so right...and he tastes so good, like sweet coffee. And when I am in his embrace, I get lost. My mind wanders in places I never even thought existed. They make me laugh! They both described the kiss and the embracing of the other, very romantically, then they both said “meaningless encounter” 'But there was so much passion in it. It's like the kiss was hiding something, like it's something more. She is RIGHT! You love one another, that’s what the kiss is hiding.
"Wait a second...your child's father is a Kaiba?" …."Absolutely not!" Her mother’s reaction is priceless!
And her description of Kaiba and him “already” loving the baby, is unbelievable!
When did she stop going to school? Or is she lying again?
Oh, her father’s dead…how sad!
"All I need is one good time...my fist colliding with his face!" Joey growled. I can so Imagine Joey saying this, with the actions and everything!
"Miho...I don't care." Anzu answered. She sounded a bit annoyed.
"Miho...after everything I told you, you still don't get it." Anzu sighed Miho only sees dollar signs $$$
As tradition, he lifted her veil and was astounded at how beautiful she looked. His eyes softened at the sight of her. AWWWW!
I, Anzu, take you, Seto, to be my friend, my lover, and my the presence of God, our family and friends, I offer you my solemn vow to be your faithful partner in sickness and in health, in good times and in bad, and in joy as well as in sorrow. I promise to love you unconditionally, to support you and encourage you to achieve your higher goals, to comfort you in times of distress, grow with you in mind and spirit, always be open and honest with you, to honor and respect you, to laugh with you and cry with you, and to cherish you for as long as we both shall live. I give you this ring as a symbol of my love and faithfulness. As I place it on your finger, I commit my heart and soul to you. I ask you to wear this ring as a reminder of the vows we have spoken today, our wedding day."
Kaiba was amazed by her words WOOO! I’m amazed too!
WOW! His was short, but meaningful!
In the middle of the table was an ice sculpture of the blue eyes white dragon he is so obsessed with that thing.
"After years of sibling rivalry, you can see that my brother has finally figured out who the best man really is...me! But seriously, you don't marry someone just because you think you can live with them… you marry them because you know you can't live without them. I wish Seto and Anzu all the best now and forever. As you go through life together, always love each other, respect each other and be there for each other. Never forget to say "I'm sorry" when you mess up and never go to bed angry. Separately, you're both wonderful people, but together you take life to a new level. I love you both. Congratulations! To Mr. and Mrs. Kaiba!" Mokuba raised his glass. OMG! Mokuba that speech is AWESOME!
You really should get a sense of humor...I don't want our kid thinking daddy is mad all the time." She stated That was perfect!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! The ending is so SWEET! I loved that she kept her maiden name!
| Liwliwa-Janoah chapter 6 . 7/6/2013
I mean its one thing to be having a baby with Kaiba, but to be marrying him?' she sighed to herself. I’m sighing with her too.
Where the hell did Serenity come from?
"What? Don't tell us its twins!" Joey yelled LMAO! OMG!
WHAT!" they all said in unison. _
Whoa...That guy doesn't waste any time does he?" Tristan asked. LOL!
But I’m confused, just like her…he said 5:30….
So basically she’s missed the entire day of school…
"What! You better watch yourself Kaiba!" Joey spat. LMAO!
Mouthing YOU? What does that mean?
Ha..they have the same favourite colour.
"The world of course...Seto Kaiba getting married to the love of his life that no one even knew he had, is a big deal. I mean he was known as a bachelor for so long, no one had a clue that he was seeing anyone." Well this is interesting! But I laughed at this “Seto Kaiba getting married to the love of his life that no one even knew he had”.
I think, she should let Yugi walk her down. Or at least her mother. I bet if she heard, Tea was getting married next week, she would come home really quick.
I assure you this will be a wedding that the world will talk about for years." Feed his ego!
I just how he’s always there to catch her when she’s about to fall. Even though he did have to literally catch her this time.
"I saved you didn't I?" he stated, and then he brought his head down to her shoulder and whispered "And I wasn't expecting anything in return...yet you were very generous when you returned the favor." He stated huskily. LMAO! I swore, he was gonna say, taking care of Mokuba…not saving her.
"Fine...I guess you want to make sure I got home safe and sound...Aww honey that is so sweet!" she smirked. _
The two stared at each other for a moment. Anzu then did something that shocked them both. She reached up and planted a soft kiss on his right cheek. The two stared at each other for a brief moment as if both were trying to figure out what the other was thinking. With out realizing it, Seto brought his hand up to her face and pulled her in for a kiss. AWWWWWWW! I definitely the kiss.
What the hell just happened?' Ha ha ha. You got mesmerised, that’s what happened.
AMAZING CHAPTER! I CAN’T WAIT TO READ HER MOTHER’S REPLY TO HER ENGAGEMENT! (wINK WINK)
| Liwliwa-Janoah chapter 5 . 7/6/2013
"The wedding is next week" he stated WHAT?
"I had plenty of choices…" she stated
"Name one." He stated looking straight in her eyes.
"…. " she had no answer
"Yea...that's what I thought." He smirked
'Asshole' she thought to herself. THIS WAS HILARIOUS!
"Hn…don't be ridiculous. Money is no object...and this ring was custom made…it's the only one of its kind." He replied. For a guy who doesn’t seem to care, creating a custom ring, for the mother of your child, is sure showing his “true” feelings.
But still…that's something that can leave a girl speechless." She stated
"Hn…if that's the case, maybe I should buy you diamonds all the time." He smirked
HA HA HA
"O-okay…Seto did I do something wrong?…Cause if Roland said something he is lying." He ranted on. Lol!
He grabbed her left hand and slid the ring on her finger. She was about to say something when an all too familiar voice came into the room.
"Seto you won't believe what….." Mokuba was about to finish until he caught a glimpse of Anzu.
Way to ruin the moment Mokuba!
"…0.0…" Mokuba just stood there. The face after He told Mokuba is so FUNNY!
"I knew it! I knew you two liked each other…it was only a matter of time before it happened…and I gotta say big brother you move fast….I mean you went way over the speed limit!" he said excitedly. LMAO!
So that's why you have been so quiet and unfocused lately…your in love" he stated When Mokuba said that Kaiba’s in love…I did the evil laugh.
'You should have wrapped it up a month and a half ago' Anzu mumbled LMAO!
"Joey is not a mutt!" she yelled to her friend's defense. She reminds me of Serenity in Fake Identity.
"He'd better be wearing a flea collar when he is around my kid." HA HA HA
When he said that she could pick whatever she wants, I was like WOOOOOO! What girl doesn’t wanna hear that?
For some reason, it felt right, sitting there next to him. Tea is settling in, to the feeling of Course…becoming Kaiba’s other half.
The way he had just said her name sent shivers down her spine. HA HA HA
"Oh...Kaiba knocked you up good , your even talking like him!" HA HA HA
"We do not love each other."
"Sure you don't."
So everybody, can see they’re in love, except them? First Mokuba and Now Mai? I wonder who’s next.
and by your current situation, he gotta be one hell of a lover!" MAI is RUDE! LMAO!
"My point exactly...you two weren't drunk so you knew what the hell you were doing. There are some deep feelings that the both of you are too stubborn to admit and you just let that intensity build itself up inside of you. And when the opportunity came...both of you took advantage of the situation." Way to explain it MAI!
Mai sure has some strong Assumptions about how and why they hooked up.
"I sure hope your dress isn't white...that is for pure brides only!" she began laughing hysterically. LMAO! Tbh I started laughing after “dress isn’t white.”
AMAZING CHAPTER! I LOVE THE RING AND I MAI!
| Liwliwa-Janoah chapter 4 . 7/6/2013
"What is it to think about?" he stated
"Yugi…its a lot to think about…I mean it's a baby for Ra's sake!"
I’m sure if Yugi wasn in Kaiba’s shoes, he wouldn’t say such a thing!
Well, in Kaiba’s defence, He’s done a really GREAT job with Mokuba! The baby will be fine. So he doesn’t need to worry. Sure the “baby” part is a new learning experience, but he’ll get it.
"Yea….two days is a long time…you don't write, you don't call….I mean what am I supposed to think?" Joey playfully whined. I think that Joey needs some time alone, he spends too much time with his friends.
"Yugi!…my man, I didn't know you had it in ya…" Joey exclaimed. LMAO!
"Okay...now your just naming people!"
'Surely Joey couldn't be that stupid' she said to herself.
Tea, Joey is that stupid. Odion? I swore he was gonna say Weevil or Rex.
"She didn't Tristan….she wouldn't…he forced you didn't he? That bastard...I'll kill him!" Joey ranted. Honestly what’s up with them, keep saying that he forced her? He’s not a rapist!
"Do you know what this means Anzu? It means you have sealed your fate….your gonna be stuck with Kaiba for the rest of ya life! Joey stated. Way to make her feel better Joey! SMH!
"Man...There isn't a punishment worst than that." Tristan added They really know how to make her feel good….SMH!
"Man. Anzu, I gotta say...you dug yourself a pretty deep hole." Tristan stated. Tristan sure is not helping.
"Thanks Guys" she was really relieved. Despite their protests, her friends were right behind her. She really has great friends.
"What about school? What about your dancing career that you have been dreaming about ever since you were 10?" Mom, just made reality set it…sacrifice.
I didn’t know Juliard was a dance school…I always thought it was just for music.
Where the hell is her father?
"You and I are going to get married."
If I didn’t pre-read this story, I would have been shocked, just like her…
"Hold the hell up! Kaiba you do not have to marry me to be a father to your child…get with the times!" She’s correct but…
I have to protect my family. And since you are going to be the mother of my child...that makes you family." AWWWWW!
"I get it...I will marry you." What a proposal. But at least she saw where he was coming from and didn’t refuse his offer…
'His house is like a palace!' This will be yours one day Tea! (I would’ve been totally surprised, If I didn’t pre-read this chapter.
SUPERBLY Written Chapter! _ (grinning face).
| Liwliwa-Janoah chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
Anzu sat back down on her sofa. She was really happy that Yugi is standing behind her. She didn't know what she would do without him. He really was one of those friends you get once in a lifetime. You can say that again! Not because of his friendship qualities but also because of the puzzle and all that came along with it…
"No kidding...I think we will have to tie him down first." He laughed. Made me smile (smiley face)
Okay Anzu...just call...he is definitely in his office...how do I know?...Because he has no life... she chuckled while dialing the number. WOW!
"Look...I know he is there and he can answer the goddamn phone for a couple of minutes! Now will you please transfer me to his office?" Anzu angrily stated. WHEW! She has the poor receptionist nervous.
"Oh great...put her through" When he said that, I hint some excitement in his voice _ (wink wink).
"Aww...you miss me?" Made me smile (smiley face)
"Egotistical Bastard." She mumbled HA ha ha
If her apartment lit up. Didn’t she have to buzz him into the building before he arrived to her door?
"Am I sure? Of course I am sure! You think I would lie about something like this?" she yelled. I don’t get the vibe that he think she was lying. I think, does she mean, she’s REALLY pregnant?
I just think he’s in shock. Saying “I need time to think”, isn’t necessarily a bad thing.
I forgot to mention that I found it really sad, that it's only because of Mokuba, she decided that Kaiba had that right to know that she's carrying his child. SMH! His brother has nothing to do with the "action" you did with Kaiba. But at least she decided to do the right thing and tell him.
| Liwliwa-Janoah chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
"I am not cranky!" She snapped.
"S-sure of course you aren't" Tristan nervously laughed. Made me (smiley face)
"I really could go for a bacon-double cheese burger, chili-cheese fries and a large chocolate milkshake." Anzu stated. I honestly thought this was Joey.
"Whoa Anzu...for a second there I thought you would out-eat Joey" Tristan said.
"That is not humanly possible" she replied while still slurping her milkshake. This also me (smiley face)
"Yea and you usually don't eat that much...you definitely gave me a run for my money today!" Joey laughed. LOL!
"Nah, I am staying over at Tristan's...my father is acting out again." I like that you included Joey’s dad, whom they never mention. But I never knew he would be abusive or alcoholic (I’m guessing)…even though, every time he’s mentioned, that’s what he’s written as in a fanfic...I still wasn’t expecting it.
Well...for one, you have been falling asleep in school, your mood quickly changes sometimes..." he was cut off. Yugi, figured it out!
"That's not possible...You're my best friend and I care about you. Anzu please talk to me... I just think Yugi is the SWEETEST guy ever!
"Did he force you?" he asked becoming angry. Honestly? Why is it that whenever I read a fanfic, where Kaiba and Tea “did it”... the only possible response from her friends is “did he force you?” SMH! Kaiba might be a mean guy, but he isn’t a rapist….(even though, I’ve read a fanfic like that though).
"That's one hell of a thank you" he said sarcastically. OH YEAH! One hell of a thank you alright!
"Anzu, he has a right to know." He calmly stated Yes Yugi! Speak sense into her!
"I don't hate you Anzu! And I never will. I am just trying to take all of this in. I mean...you just dropped a bomb on me...I mean you are pregnant with my rivals baby!" he said. Way to tell her…
You will not be alone...I'm not going anywhere. I am here for you and I always will be." He said calmly. Yugi’s just the best friend, she could have…
| Liwliwa-Janoah chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Judging from the synopsis of this story, all I have to say is…smh. See I knew something was gonna happen, after he took her virginity and didn’t wear a condom. They’re gonna be parents…Not such a bad thing though.
I honestly can’t believe she doesn’t remember that she had sex with Kaiba…what? Does she has selective memory?
"Because thats what it was...nothing" OUCH! He said it was nothing...
"Maybe not to you...It was my first time"
"You could've fooled me" See what I’m saying? Tea was a pro!
Hn...From what I hear, Yugi saves you all the time...I wonder what kind of 'thank-you' you give him." OOOOOO, He shouldn’t have said that…
OMG! He called it relieving stress…poor, poor, Tea!
LMAO! Red, hot, monkey, sex…
WOW! She’s crying over giving her virginity to Kaiba…and he feels bad that he told her it was nothing more than a one night stand…WOW!
So my memory did serve me right. Kaiba Corp Island, did blow up. I love how you incorporated your fanfic so well into the original, that to me I felt that this is what happened, even though I know that is not the case.
I think Chapter 1 is off to a GREAT START!