Reviews for Happily Ever After
monkey chapter 5 . 6/25/2009
I realy like the story but can u make a new chapter about kerry and james becuese u have got a brilliant story and putting james and kerry in the ending would make it cool.

a bit of a starting point.

james went to kerrys house and used his trustey lock pick to get in he didnt like using it but he was desperate to see kerry again he had dreams about her for godness sake!

james saw a crying kerry on her bed and sat by her.

"james im a tell tayll i probably ruined cherub for ever"

"kerry, you couldent of done enything"

"but james i let YOU down YOU!"

"kez stop worring yourself and,well,why are u angry about letting me down?"

"james i fancy u"

kerry had stoped crying now and was sudenly looking VERY sexy.

"kerry i fancy u 2"

then they kissed

know that is a story line
6WillhelmBroon-Cherubfan chapter 5 . 6/18/2009
How dare you kill off Kyle.

Good Story.

But WHY?

Kyle and Rod are so perfect together.

I know this is an insignificant part of the story but why Kyle?

Could'nt you have killed off Callum or Connor, Shak or Mo. No one cares about them.

But everyone loves Kyle.

But still a good story.
twilightFRIENDShip chapter 5 . 6/13/2009
wow 11-percent-nerd! great story! It really rocks. I think I read it in 5 minutes flat I was so curious to find out what happens next!
Riley Worthington chapter 5 . 6/6/2009
I'd kinda like to know what happens next. Please. So far i like this story and hope you continue it. This is the first story i've seen where the CHERUBs are all adults and i like it very much.
AreoplaneJelly chapter 4 . 5/4/2009
Dum Dum Dum! Kerry knows the reporter!
Really good chapter 3 . 5/2/2009
WOW! GREAT IDEA! You should definatly write more of it!
AreoplaneJelly chapter 3 . 4/29/2009
Oh! KERRY! YAY! And she has a kid! Heeheehee! I LIKE this story!
AreoplaneJelly chapter 2 . 4/27/2009
OMG! James is an idiot! La la la la la la! Sorry: I don't like James, he's stuck up and sexist... I like this story, It looks like it's going in a good direction... Please write more!
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