Thanks for this awesome story! I ate it up! Edward would be proud. Haha. Seriously, though I enjoyed this original idea so much! I liked how Edward was a ruthless killer and found his way to Bella. I always like when there is. Twist in power and I liked seeing Jane getting a taste of her own medicine from Bella. I thought it was interesting that the mates took on aspects of the others' personality. Very nice. So thanks for writing this story. I know it was a bunch of years ago for you, but I really enjoyed it!

Edaar's change outtake was brutal, wow. Enjoyed your story, just wished we Found out what happened when Edward encountered his old friend on the top of that mountain. And since Seytar was sired by Edward's venom, he will be quite powerful too. Would love to know how that meeting went. Were they friendly towards each other?

Too bad Jasper didn't get to have his vengeance on Maria. I really liked the bond that Alice and Edward seemed to have found. Also, surprisingly, I liked that Edward shut Esmee down. I don't know why I liked it but I think it's because he let them all know he's calling the shots. Yet...He still was able to show mercy when not threat was present. Was surprised at the abrupt departure since he had previously told Bella that she would get to say goodbye. Oh well.

An emotional bombshell of a chapter. Whoa.

Wow that was a chapter that was chock full of action. And mayhem and destruction and their first mating. What a chapter.

Wonder about Edward leaving those two women drained dry to be found in the hotel. Seems Edward and Alice may have found a bond. Wonder what Jasper is thinking. I'm sure eventually she will confide in her mate.

I just love it. Edward was fuckawesome and the Volterra scene was just wow... The cliffy though, left me biting off my nails. Thanks for sharing this :)

this is a very interesting story and i'm enjoying it very much, however, the a/n's are becoming extremely annoying and tedious. they add nothing to the story.

if edward is going to be this much of a bastard to everyone though this entire story it's going to get old and boring very quick!

edward changed her didn't he?

interesting. very interesting. does alice see him coming?

There was some chatter about this fix in one of the last posts on RobAttack so I decided to give it a go. Interesting premise thus far.

How many _ does it take to change a light bulb?

I am hoping that BElla starts to come into her true powers and rules along side Edward. And that Aro is going dowwwwwwnnnn.

Interesting story- curious what happens when the two old friends meet after chapter 36

Things are about to get interesting.