Edward put thoughts in Bella's head so he should have been able to put
Alice's past into her head.

That was sadistic. He could at least drink from criminals.

The fact that Edward changed Bella seemed to be skipped right over, not even
mentioned. I do wish that Edward had put Tanya in her place a little better.
Even after their encounter she was thinking about attacking Bella just because
Bella had something she wanted. Edward should have made it very terrifyingly
clear that she needed to stay out of their way if she wanted to live. Maybe even
throwing in how unappealing she was to him.

Tanya needs a beating.

I hope Bella gets to smack her around.

I bet Jonathon disappeared shortly after that encounter.

I'm betting that was Demetri that was hit by lightening because of his thoughts.

I guess that's why Edward wasn't able to kill her.

I figured he knew.

I would like the answer to some questions. Edward has to know she is his
mate and on some level that is probably why she isn't dead. He has to know
she is his mate. If not back then, he has to know now. When did he figure this
out and would he really kill her?

I don't want Edward to slaughter them but I like that they're being put in their place.
I hate how so many stories cater to them like they are in charge.

Why the hell is there even a decision to make? Why would he kill Carlisle coven
when they didn't do anything wrong?
I'm assuming that Bella is his mate. Shouldn't Edward be aware of that? Mr.
Almighty powerful that he is? What an ass.

I have certainly enjoyed reading this fanfiction story more than once. I have noticed and many other people as well who have reviewed that there possibly stories to this fanfiction story spinoff that could be done. First is the story Seth of he survived affair all this years leading up to meeting with Edward to catch up on old times. Second is Edward and Bella’s adventures traveling around the world. Third is what are Cullen clan are doing after Bella and Edwards left to travel around world.

Why is chapter 28 not there?

I love revisiting these two!