UGH, this was just perfect! I really enjoyed all the angst and of course, how they got together in the end. This is totally Princess Bride mode for me I hope that I can find similar stories like this soon!

... i'm just gonna... go-go cry in a corner now... at... the beauty of it all. *sobs*
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Amazing...

this makes me cry. so beautiful and precious. the mood and setting sucks the reader in. thank you very much. please write some more.

MA FEELS. wow. just. wow. kinda sad that sasuke was gay, because he is a pretty beautiful specimen ;D but this is absolutely gorgeous, and beautifully written. :)

I think, after reading this, I could die happy. You did a wonderful job and though I did not get the chance to read the original, I bet it was just as amazing. I'm in awe.

Truly.

LOVELY. I have a soft spot for AUs and a soft spot for KakaSaku and this had BOTH. Also, well-written as usual. :)

This would have been an amazing multi-chaptered story, but the way you had written it was perfect! Thank you for writing this piece, it was beautiful :,)

I loved it! :)

I really enjoyed this one shot. I loved how it felt medievalist with the ninja twist. Awesome!

Your tone throughout the story was superb.

Amazing story. Very well thought out.

A masterpiece.

W.O.W. Great are an awesome writer. Keep up the good work:)

You my friend, are a master of mood. That is a very powerful weapon that you wield in your hands.

I've read many many stories, and I've seen many many different ways that a writer has created mood in his or her story, but I must say that this drama is one of the best. Often authors get so stuck on writing descriptions that they become trivial and actually begin to detract from the rest of the story and the characters themselves. Other times, an author will minimalize detail to the point that depth is forgotten, and the reader wonders if there is anything more left to the characters to be discovered. Instead of creating mystery through vagueness, the author has created a sense of superficiality that begins to tingle in the back of each readers' mind. You didn't do either of these, but instead chose to excel in the middle ground. Every action detail was integrated seamlessly and propelled the story forward, while every characterization detail served to further differentiate the characters from one another and add a unique flavor to their special blends.

While I believe that if you had wrote this as a highly detailed, multi-chaptered story, it would have been beautiful; however, I think the style in which you wrote this was perfect. You kept it simple, which allowed to you to make it the characters all the more complex. Every scene has a purpose, and that let the silence of the moments in-between scenes speak volumes for themselves. I feel like im startting to babble, but honestly thats how psyched I am about this fic. The mood you created sucked me into their world.

From the very first scene, I could feel the rising drama. By the third scene, I was crying... but the real drama hadnt even begun! You are a fearsome writer. I must read more from you. Haha sorry to write such a long review but I cant even begin to articulate how much this story moved me. Thank god Sakura realized "she was better than that," because I dont think I could have handled the kind of romantic endings she was reading about... and thank you for riding this lovely bit, I think it really did live up to the potential you were yearning for.

On a side note, I think a story from Kakashi's pov would have quite the potential for greatness as well. *Hint* *Hint* ;D haha

ANYWAY, Please continue write. I cant wait to read what other things you have in store!

Yours Truly,

MicroBeat

Ahh... This was so sweet. Made me sigh, especially the way it ended! (That part! When she asked him to call her by her given name... *melts*) Wonderfully written! _