This is a sweet story! I love the concept you did, the somewhat forbidden romance and everything! I was always a sucker for such stories...

Anyways, keep up the good work! This is awesome!

I didn't get to read the original, but this was lovely. I just find myself wishing it were longer, I want more! _v

Very well written! :D

loved it

This story is just, well, too good for words. It's perfect. Short, but not overly so. It's just right. The dialogue is good and well enough to really make the characters and emotions come to life. I also like how you didn't make Sasuke so much as hate Sakura, but rather just not feel anything (considering he didn't swing that way. lol. nice touch). Kakashi was very in character here. His calm, protective atmosphere was handled greatly with his short, but meaningful lines. I was relieved that you had Sakura make the first real move, and at the end, finally have to force him to show his love. To me, it just seems like that's the way it would happen. Bravo!

I absolutely adore this story! It's wonderful.

Absolutely loved this :) !

wow...this is really good,,

i really love it

Awwh :D

This is perfect, and the language is very posh. Ideas are original.

XD

I like the style of this, its cool, measured wistfulness. Very good.

It's a fairytale that is more beautiful than any other.

_" I ...am pretty sure my heart fluttered somewhere in there.

So wonderful. This gets better every time a read it. This would be my third.

I loved it.

Oh yeah, I did! This was a beautiful kakasaku :-)