Reviews for A twist in my story
jk chapter 2 . 11/10/2016
I don't get it. Why does Edward stare at bella? does she smell good to him like in the book? why in the fuck would someone want to kill bella if she just got to forks? that doesn't make much sense, does it? and the "twist" that you sucked me in with is just...intent?
stupid!
jk chapter 1 . 11/10/2016
I'm not gonna lie, that was a shitty intro
Jojo chapter 7 . 6/7/2016
I really like this story! If you will, please continue on with it!
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 7 . 4/18/2014
that chapter was great. how often will you update cant wait
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 6 . 4/18/2014
ok they still haven't figured it out but maybe there is nothing tofigure out
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 5 . 4/18/2014
well don't think anyone want to kill Bella think it is a mistake
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 4 . 4/18/2014
sounds like two girls a we bit jealouse
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 3 . 4/18/2014
well that was sweet and I thinkAlice has her little vision wrong not someone making a discussion butva future glimps of just the future that's all like when she saw Jasper when they met
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 2 . 4/18/2014
is this just a visionfrom Alice or is some one really trying to kill Bella
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
well that was weir don't you think
Liv-Love-Work-Play-READ chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
Pouty face x please finish
Guest chapter 7 . 2/8/2013
update this story NOW!
Guest chapter 7 . 2/3/2013
MORE! NOW!
EGG BEASTIE I just didn't log chapter 7 . 7/21/2010
I just realized

Ur writing has improved drastically since this story and trucknapper

Great job
cb chapter 7 . 5/21/2010
awesome please post more really soon, i can't wait to read what happens next...i wonder who the killer is and why? Looking forward to all the future chapters hope to read the next one soon...
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