|Reviews for I Saw Her Standing There|
| How to be bellatrix 101 chapter 8 . 11/6/2011
" groovy " what I'd this the 70s century up dude/dudette! Don't get me wrong though I love it
| How to be bellatrix 101 chapter 3 . 11/6/2011
Wow! That's one big family! My guess is that Reese is a metamophmahus?
| skysky chapter 11 . 7/6/2009
you MUST i repeat MUST continue! this is one of the best SS/oc stories ive read! it is amazing please continue! im begging! im hooked! have you ever concedred turning it into a series?
| wickedbella chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
I agree with Me, this is a complete Sue with bad grammar and spelling. I feel sick, please excuse me.
| Nubian Queen chapter 3 . 11/13/2005
Yay, finally a HP SSnape fic worth reading! Interesting story, I'll continue to keep a watch and promise to leave a better review when I'm not so bloody tired my eyes keep crossing.
Sincerely, Then Nubian Queen
| Shiny Lights chapter 11 . 1/30/2005
update soon! i like this.
| Me chapter 10 . 6/13/2004
Also, you need a beta for grammar. You don't capitalize words like he and she at the end of quotations.
For example, “Good morning, Professor Snape,
| Me chapter 8 . 6/13/2004
I'm sorry, but I can't see Snape butting into other teachers' conversations. Students, definitely, but not Snape. He was raised to be polite. Sarcastic and cold does not always equal rude.
| Me again chapter 7 . 6/13/2004
Would be better if you broke up those big paragraphs into smaller ones, like this:
“That, class, is a Sivily toad. Despite what the picture shows, they are quite small, around the size of an everyday bullfrog. They are nasty creatures, though. Known to lure people to sleep with their boring ‘voice’. Now, these toads do not speak, mind you, but they have adapted to make noises that sound almost human. They use these sounds to lure an unsuspecting person into a trap. The person then is lulled to sleep by the toad. No one is quite sure how the toads managed to sound so human and why these sounds make us want to sleep.
| Me chapter 5 . 6/13/2004
Her wavy, light brown hair reached the middle of calves. It cascaded over her shoulders and down her back. She had stray strands and wisps of hair decorating her face and was vainly trying to push them back in their proper place. She was clearly tall and somewhat lanky. She had long legs that seemingly went on forever. Her skin lacked color, she was pale, but somehow looked healthy. Her face barely flushed now from being embarrassed.
This whole description is very Mary Sue-ish. Also, an indicator of a Sue is whether your screen name matches hers, and yours does. I suppose she has special abilities, like being better than Harry at DADA or better than Snape at potions or the HP version of telepathy? If so, then she is a Sue.
| Snapelover chapter 3 . 4/14/2004
Really ,Really loved it !Write more Snape fan Fic PLZ!
| Athena-megami chapter 11 . 8/16/2003
hey, I'd just like to say that I like the story so far...well, mostly. I do think that you are taking the liberty of being able to fool with the characters a bit far in Snape's case...he's mostly OOC the whole fic...which, isn't TOO horrible, just not as cool as it would be if he was IC the whole time. Other than that, I'm loving your portrayal of all the other characters, especially . I also think that she would be completely impartial to Snape and yet still understand his "appeal". YAY! And I like the surprise of Katerina being not all that she seemed. Wow...this is a long review. Oh well, it'll make up for me not reviewing at every chapter like I'm s'posed to. :P Well, other than that...I've only been shocked by few spelling errors (ex: "class demised"...as in...class dead...which amused me). :) continue on!
OH! and PLEASE PLEASE make the chapters longer! YAY!
| aerin chapter 11 . 4/28/2003
Sorry for not signing in...I'm lazy...anyway. This is really interesting! Keep it up; can't wait to see what happens next! (Wedding bells aren't a bad way to end a story...*hint hint*)
| Darkness of the Soul1 chapter 11 . 4/8/2003
?i'm confused now...please don't let Malfoy keep Kat and Sev apart! they would be perfect! okay i'll shut up now...
| Lemonly chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
So, since when did Hogwarts get a new Potions master, coincidentally named Severus Snape (just like the previous one) who's all happy-happy-love-peace? I'm sorry, it's just that Snape is terribly out of character in this fic. Just out of curiosity, if you're going to make up your own people anyways, why are you keeping their names and labeling it Harry Potter fanfiction?