Reviews for Heeding the Call
thena-ditey chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
Holy crap. I never noticed that Marshall and Raph were never in any scenes together. But they had to have met, right? At least before Stand Up Triple. Even if she or her family mentioned him in passing...right? *Blink, bink* Huh.
Trash Reads chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Why did you stop? Really good first chapter. You should try and finish it. I love the fact that she got out of the shower. That ending made me mad too.
ithreatenedtostapleher chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
I like this ending better than the other one. :)
onlywaytobegone chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Thank you for this. I hated the ending of that ep. Much better this way. :)
MadeOfStars chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Excellent reworking of the episode ending. It really needed it. I love this line in particular: "Normally, by the time they were both naked, she was already more than halfway to the big happy." You totally got Mary's voice there. I also like the idea that she has never mentioned Marshall to Raph. That fits too.
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
This really zeros in on the M&M relationship and also Mary's use of Raph on an occasional basis.

She really should let him and Brandi get together and stick with Marshall!

Good story!
mariskafan2012 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
i like this ending better lol.

good job.
distorted realities chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Your story makes me so much happier than the episode ending. No matter how many times I read it, I love it. :-)
McGiva chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
I can so see this happening! great job hope you to continue it...
kiwi-me chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Much better ending! I know exactly how you feel. Enjoyed the episode right up until she hoped in the shower with Raph.

This is in character and a well written ending to how Humbolt shoulda been!
wisher93 chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
WOW! This is a way better ending... but your not done right? Well please don't be! This is a good story and I hope you add more!
creative-writing-girl13 chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
This is really good! And Jealously does not suite you Raph!~sings the crazy girl who is love with this story!~

Yes that was a compliment...and showing my randomness at the same time! yay! Two-For-One! Get-two for the price of one? Sorry I'll stop now! Update soon!
Citiesofcolor chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Oh. I see potential for this one... Who the hell is Marshall indeed...
staceydc328 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
It would be Mary that would answer her phone while in foreplay and then head off to work.

And why is Mary surprised that she has never mentioned Marshall. It is part of her job to not talk about it to civilians. And if Marshall had not been over to the house to pick up Mary then Jinx and Brandi would not know about him.

But didn't they (Marshall and Ralph) meet at Mary's birthday party? For some reason I recall them eyeing each other at the party.
mic19671967 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Very interesting!

Mic (the wife)
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