Reviews for Autumn Afternoons
Suji and dhushi chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
sup yo?

good story man... but it would have been better if you made them kiss :D :D :D



i like the story however reandom it is ]

good first story


laters jondia :D
whydontyouletmedelete chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
aw... LOVELY! this is just so beautiful and... cute and touching *sniff*

with this story you make every author killing one of the pevensies (soon including me ( ) feel so ashamed...
Aslan is love chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
love this story,
ilysia chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Oh, this is lovely! There's such a sense of peace and contentment over the entire story, and you really let the reader get a sense for your characters while setting a gentle scene at the same time. You've managed to show the four as sovereigns, yet sovereigns who still need time to themselves to be children and, every now and then, act their ages.
SpangleyPony chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
This is a beautiful story, what is your book about?
eriphi chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Ohh, this is lovely! Congratulations on your first posted story, and it is a joy.

It is so nice to read a family story that captures the characters so succinctly - Susan's officiousness and maternal-type love, Edmund's quiet intellect, and the joy in Peter that Lucy awakens. Everything felt just right here, and I did very much enjoy reading.

I look forward to lots more now that you have hopefully caught the bug.