Reviews for The Biological Clock
mafuyunagareboshi chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
I really lol'd when they started talking about Gray's sex life XD yes Claire, you don't wanna know and it's better you don't.

This was very well written. Well done! I wish I could write like you
Mellarkios chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
This is so fluffy i cannot
StellaAllets chapter 3 . 1/27/2011
aww this story is very sweet, i shed a tear :')
Tiny Cherie chapter 3 . 12/21/2009

and the fact that i'm listening to a very emotional and sweet instrumental song doesn't help. AT ALL.
lendara chapter 3 . 6/8/2009
Oh,That was so cute.

Kenzie by Claire and Gray

autumnsdark chapter 3 . 5/14/2009
Wow, I just totally missed this story :O When was it even submitted?

Totally -awesome-! This has completely refreshed my love for this pairing, and it was so cuute 3 Great job, fantastic! *adds to favorites*
Dionysus S chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Hohoho, the ending to this first chapter certainly made me giggle. And my God, was Ann annoying (and Tim, but I can easily forgive him). But I understand what's she's saying, and why she said all those things. Gray's fears are also understandable, and I kinda feel bad for Kai. Poor man...

Great first chapter-the bar scene totally made me giggle a couple of times.

Icefire149 chapter 3 . 4/30/2009
omg! i loved that! this story was far better than i expected. well i knew it would be good, but this story is great! good luck with the contest!

i loved the ending the best, lol
HmGirly chapter 3 . 4/29/2009

I love everything about this story.

I love Gray, I love Claire, I love baby. I love Kai's insecure parenting and Tim's doting father-ness. I love the name Kenzie and Saibara being all cool collected grandfather like

I love YOU. :D

*favorites a thousand times*

- Hannah
Curimuch chapter 3 . 4/29/2009
Hey Val, this was a wonderful story and I enjoyed it from the start to the end. It was very enjoyable and realistic, and you do a grumpy Gray excellently as always.

Everyone was in-character and engaging.

It's hard for me to find words for this review, but you get my point lol
XxXTwilight-SinXxX chapter 3 . 4/28/2009
That was beautiful. I loved the name and the reason behind it, funny yet sweet.
sugarapplesweet chapter 3 . 4/28/2009
Gray is going to spoil that little rotten... and so help Kevin if he even THINKS about ever getting together with her when they're older. XD

Seriously, though, this chapter was written beautifully, and I felt like I was there with Gray the whole time. Makes me wish I was a man, so then I could have that experience instead of having to bring the child into the world myself. _;

And that ending? Pure love! ;)

Good luck with the contest (not like you need it with this entry)!
sugarapplesweet chapter 2 . 4/28/2009
Gray as a concerned husband is just so perfect, and I like how even though he's worried, he's still got some snark. Especially with him dealing with his equally stubborn wife. X3

Can you feel the love?
sugarapplesweet chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Do you have any idea how hard it is to go to a class review after reading, "Nothing is wrong with my stuff!" XD

I seriously could stop from smiling reading this entire chapter since everything was just too sweet. The insecurities of becoming a father, or a parent overall, was really heartwarming, and the laughs just made it all the more fun.

And you really don't have to thank me because you're writing's awesome as it is!
Eve Pomme chapter 3 . 4/28/2009
Welcome to the world Kenzie!

I had to cry when Gray first saw her! I just HAD to! Beautiful work, Jeanie, beautiful work.